|Reviews for The House We Build|
| Alpecca Ankaa Black chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
A lovely and well-written story.
| Lady Helen of Mora chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
i came across this story by chance, and i have to say i LOVED it! well done! it was very intresting and i loved the way it started ;)
| Dizzo chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Powerful stuff, I love how the sad old house became a magnet for negative energy, and became bleaker and more tainted as the years went by. Fabulous idea.
And Missouri turning up was a surprise too!
Great job :)
| MeAzrael chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Oh Jesus, that's a masterpiece! I love every word of it – simply awesome. How you described the long and sad history of that special house as if it'd be a living thing (which, obviously, it is, in your story) – how it's simply fate and circumstances that lead to it's final descent. How the people around it are - well, human beings, with all their flows and failures... and how it get's more and more tainted with the bad vibrations, like an abyss - huge! And hey, Missouri. Somehow missed the old lady - thanks for bringing her back, and putting another POV in the whole "hunting the evil down" business. Very thoughtful, and wonderfully written LFT :-)
| Swellison chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
This has some wonderfully descriptive narrative in it, and you surprised me with who ended up being the narrator at the end - obviously, I forgot to peek at the top of the page:-)
Go Missouri - I really would like to see her come back in another ep - practically everyone else has;-)
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Very beautifully written! I loved this description: air of resentment and crushed dreams wasn't dispersed by new life but clung to the flaking paint, sinking foundation and lopsided windows like an invisible fog
chilling and I loved the POV!