Reviews for Cracked
Sak chapter 1 . 11/29/2019
This was perfect
That is all
What more can I say? Just great! Each line each reaction and internal dialogue was so good.
Thank you for this!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
Super cute! You wrote then both perfectly!
FillInTheBlankNow chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Oh my goodness! What a brilliant insight into Reno. Tifas confidence and sharp wit here are just spot on. Their banter was perfect and you are an absolutely gifted writer. This is a gem.
damagectrl.07 chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Really cute! Well done! :)
SingleStone chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
So cute. I love this!
Axelkin chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Very cute. Loved their interaction. Great job.
sakR9 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Beautiful and sweet.

Really written in such a way to grab at your heart strings, srsly.

I loved this.

Everything about it.
Princess Catpow chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This was pleasant. I liked it, very much.

Seeing the in-between transition of their hesitant friendship was captured nicely.

Good job. (:
womanaction chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Dialogue was great, imagery was great...even the short length was good. I honestly have no critique.
Rianna-Saraephina chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Loved it. I could just picture this in my head as I read it. I like your one-shots, they're nicely done :)
retired-rebel chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
why isn't this multi-chapped. GAWDDAMN YOU! Tis excellent. Write more.
iffallends chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
:) This fic made me smile hard. It was cute and funny in a fluffy way. I really enjoyed the dialogue 'cause it made it a really good one-shot.

Good job on the work!