Reviews for Out of Order
Crazy Fennec Fox chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
You horrible person, making me so sad. Lovely writing though, just like all of your other pieces. :)
SonicTeamFreeWill chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
aw, crying now :'( beautiful though, loved it
Nerdlee chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
How terribly sad.

noche-estrellada chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
So beautifully bittersweet... Just lovely.
Hello-Sweetie19 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
this was soooo beautiful! it made me cry!
Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
JBoogle chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
This was so beautiful! I absolutely love that you tied in both River's death and The Doctor's! It shows just how much they need each other/love each other. Bittersweet and so so sooo emotional. After reading this and watching the part where The Doctor gets shot, the look in his eyes ties in so well with this story, imagining what he must have been feeling knowing that River was about to die, if not dead already.

Man this was really well thought out! Bravo!
Linwe Elendil chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Sad and sweet at the same time. Very well done. :-)
hannahncakes chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
wonderful. Sad, funny and sweet in all the write places. You portrayed them perfectly.
Runt the Brave chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Hey! I'm writing this! Humph.

Which, basically means I loved it. I love River's line about how going to get milk was an adventure for the Doctor. And the whole interactions about the sonic was excellent. Thanks for writing!
Songbird chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Good characterization in this one. Loved the banter. Not everyone can portray the chemistry between those two.