|Reviews for Pika and Chuchu to the Action|
| Catherine chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
I liked the story. Gear job pulling that line in the end, but you never actually mentioned if red knows her secret in the beginning but it was pretty clear in the end. Also there are some grammar mistakes.
| Kitteh chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
What..? He made himself blush? Sheesh that dudes got problems... But Im sure they can be fixed by Yellow :3 I ship those two way too much... Ooo Iloved the story! (Sorry if i have bad grammer its hard to type onb a tablet)
| NoProb101 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
HA! LOL I just love Red. XD
And Specialshipping is just so ADORABLE!
| Glaceon1362 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
| RougeElephant chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
*heart* Omg I love it! *heart*
| Tenebras Lux chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
its such a happy, quick-paced (i think) story, and i love it! its so cute.
but, say, /Unova is a region that far away from Kanto/... you dont really have anything to compare the distance to, so i dont really think you shoud say 'that far away'. instead, i suggest you use something more like 'very far away'. its simple, yes, but more grammatically correct. ... im pretty sure...
anyhow, i love pika and chuchu's conversation :)
and ... pika and red's "conversation"
and red's typical awkward line at the end :p
~ Breezy. Hope i can help in any way~~~~~
| beemoose chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Would you like some help with your editing? I realize English isn't your native language, so there are some mistakes in what words you used and stuff like that. If you would like some help just let me know!
| LegendaryPokemonMew chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I love Reds last line! This is great, Specialshipping and whatever you call Pika/Chuchu shipping forever!
| xxx chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Lol Red and his catchphrase always makes me laugh, he should know better when you're saying it to the girl you like and who likes you or it's just me and my Percy thoughts XD. Anyway cute story
| XxxPuppylove12xxX chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
nice chappie! update new chappie please! i loved the part where pika tried to tell red to invite yellow to the journey!
| dragoniall chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
haha, please make a sequel!
| SilverRose1022 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
red with pika funny:)