Reviews for The Birth in the Death rewrite now complete
Slightly Angered chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I wish you would have posted a warning of spoilers, this episode didnt air til 5-12-11 i was very disappointed to kno what was going to happen in the episode it ruined the episode for me.
12Ang122 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Did you see it early or something? o-o Because that's basically what happened in today's new episode. O-O
boneslove102 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Wonderful Story.
Purple-elephantss chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
awww ')

I could cry rite now.. you portrayed the emotions so well 'specially wen Vincent was dieing...

but I really hope he doesnt die cause he's my fav Squintern (I think Sweets is gonna die thou)

OMGOGM ive been replaying that promo a thousnad times the suspense is killing me...
cheysma2000 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Great rewrite. I liked the things you changed. :)
RK chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i loved this OS Twilit - it was perfect with the emotions coming across so well. I am with you- i dont want them to do the deed yet, they are not ready. but i would love to see them just sleep together for comfort and i have no problems if he calls her baby or kisses the top of her head :):)