|Reviews for The Vanquished|
| Makorra And Naga Rule chapter 6 . 3/8
Is the general being named Alexander a nod to Alexander the Great ? Though this Alexander is a bastard.
| Makorra And Naga Rule chapter 5 . 3/8
hahaha, Filia name is a joke. Filia is latin for sister. Well played author, well played
| James chapter 14 . 2/27
I'm not going to tell you to continue on with the story. As much as I've enjoyed this story over the past few years, I respect your choice. Know that the people who have stuck through and have enjoyed your story would love if you continued.
Your always faithful reader James. Keep on keeping on
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/24
You should start again! Don't listen to the haters!
| XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 14 . 2/24
Okay, I'm sorry, but you're being ridiculous. Why do you care about what people say? And, NO, you are NOT getting too many reviews telling you what to do. How many, like, at most 10? No, even less, and that leaves almost 200 good reviews. I like your story, almost everyone likes your story. Its called criticism, when people comment constructively on your story. You can't expect EVERYONE to agree fully with your ideas, can you? If you can't take criticism, then (no offense, just my true feelings) you shouldn't be an author.
| Trixterz99 chapter 14 . 2/22
I agree with trix. you need to make more o-or... or ima CRY :'( PLEASE, i believe in you.
| Trix chapter 14 . 2/22
WAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH FUCK U WHO JUDGED HIM AND SHIT I WANt MORE
| q chapter 13 . 2/22
A continuation of my (xxxpossessed4lifexxx) review:
I really don't know how Luxa hasn't killed this guy yet, or why she's tolerating all the abuse. If I'm missing something, please point it out. Maybe I didn't read well enough. And also, fix your comma usage.
| you are the wors chapter 13 . 2/21
You r the worst Arthur ever seriously I think you r a decraesse to suzan Collins
And I have not gone to school for a week because of this book
| James chapter 13 . 2/8
As always great chapter. I think you're giving real depth to the characters, I really do hate Alexander you've made a great character out of him, a great villain at any rate. Hope you update soon keep up the great work.
| thefchord chapter 13 . 2/7
Shit this is getting really good. I bet the "prophecy" is about Alexander. Great job, I live the way you write. Not too abrupt but not too wordy. Keep it up!
| The Overlander11 chapter 13 . 2/5
I really enjoy you're story and it's uniqueness. Although, In my opinion, the dark manner of the story was refreshing at first. But now in the 13th chapter the darkness of the story is getting a bit heavy. It is your story but I passively suggest that Gregor finally changes some things. And stops being such a wimp. I mean come on he's the warrior. He has to be able to beat up Alexander. In short I live your stories and I hope Gregor finally takes some action.
| FanMan2234 chapter 13 . 2/4
i think your story is very good i am just waiting please just let Gregor pull this fag's soul out and eat it PLEASE!
| Luana012 chapter 7 . 2/4
this is it, I do NOT want to punch the smile off Alexander's face...I wanna kill him! KILL ALEXANDER! *grabs knife and runs after Alexander*
| Luana012 chapter 6 . 2/4
I absolutely LOVE it! I hate Alexander, I want to punch the smile off his face...a bit like Gregor. I think you are amazing at writing!