|Reviews for The Vanquished|
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/24
| Guest chapter 14 . 12/24/2014
Please Please Please Continue! It's great!
Also Happy Holidays
| Zach Hanson chapter 14 . 12/2/2014
I have just finished marathoning this story, and I must say, it definitely has some of the best character development I have seen in awhile. Most authors are content with making the bad guy evil and never explaining why, but you went above and beyond and actually made the monster that is Alexander believable. Good on you for that. Luxa's downfall was also unexpected, but you described it in a way where I understood why she gave in, and I felt nothing but pity for her. I am sorry to hear that less-than-constructive has diminished your desire to finish this story. However, if that many people are dissatisfied with how this story is turning out, there must be a reason why. I implore you to find said reason, and perhaps turn it into a learning experience. Maybe then your passion would be rekindled. I sincerely hope you come back to this story, it is too good to die an early death.
| loistryd chapter 14 . 9/15/2014
Please carry on for other people's sake I was enjoying it and waiting to see how luxa and gregor get together !
| 4sdvzrh chapter 13 . 6/10/2014
Uh... I think you backed yourself in a corner. Alexander just declared war on Gregor. He even admitted to doing things to Luxa. Gregor will just go rager and destroy him. I mean like Alexander needs a Diabolus ex Machina to get him out of the shit he's in. Like if he's actually not human and is literally a demon. Gregor was taken by surprise. The whispering made Gregor unfocused so no Alexander isn't actually better than Gregor.
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/16/2014
I think you should continue. We (the readers) have seen too much character building for it just to end. Please, continue.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/31/2014
Really! Continue! Forget about them
| ARKOS.THEREFORE I WIN chapter 6 . 3/8/2014
Is the general being named Alexander a nod to Alexander the Great ? Though this Alexander is a bastard.
| ARKOS.THEREFORE I WIN chapter 5 . 3/8/2014
hahaha, Filia name is a joke. Filia is latin for sister. Well played author, well played
| James chapter 14 . 2/27/2014
I'm not going to tell you to continue on with the story. As much as I've enjoyed this story over the past few years, I respect your choice. Know that the people who have stuck through and have enjoyed your story would love if you continued.
Your always faithful reader James. Keep on keeping on
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/24/2014
You should start again! Don't listen to the haters!
| XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 14 . 2/24/2014
Okay, I'm sorry, but you're being ridiculous. Why do you care about what people say? And, NO, you are NOT getting too many reviews telling you what to do. How many, like, at most 10? No, even less, and that leaves almost 200 good reviews. I like your story, almost everyone likes your story. Its called criticism, when people comment constructively on your story. You can't expect EVERYONE to agree fully with your ideas, can you? If you can't take criticism, then (no offense, just my true feelings) you shouldn't be an author.
| Trixterz99 chapter 14 . 2/22/2014
I agree with trix. you need to make more o-or... or ima CRY :'( PLEASE, i believe in you.
| Trix chapter 14 . 2/22/2014
WAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH FUCK U WHO JUDGED HIM AND SHIT I WANt MORE
| q chapter 13 . 2/22/2014
A continuation of my (xxxpossessed4lifexxx) review:
I really don't know how Luxa hasn't killed this guy yet, or why she's tolerating all the abuse. If I'm missing something, please point it out. Maybe I didn't read well enough. And also, fix your comma usage.