This story was amazing

* Squeals * I WUV dis! XD Seriously. Good job. Now, I shall rest. I was up FAR too late reading this. :P

Aaahh so perfect! I love Darcy/Fandral and these little moments between them in the movie - and also your fanfic!
I like how you stayed close to the movie most of the time and combined it with your own plot and I am definitely going to read the sequel! :)

Awww. Fluff. I personally like Thor best, seeing as we don't really get much of Fandral's personality. Definitely going in my faves.

Great story!

Darcy, I love you. And you as well, genius authoress. XD

All my love, Artemis Sherwood

Thank you for referring to Volstagg as Gimli! I do that all the time, but nobody I know seems to make the connection. DX

All my love, Artemis Sherwood

I loved this! I too love The Princess Bride and that 'As you wish' line - total wonderfulness.

Did you know that your story is the only completed Darcy/Fandral fic in existence? I kid you not. I got on here expecting to see tons (or at least ten), but nope. Yours was it. Thanks for the fun!

Hahaha. Great pairing and story! I loved Darcy in the movie, and definitely love that they hinted at a romance between her and Fandral. You did a great job capturing her voice and reactions, and I love it. )

BTW, I nearly died of laughter when she first called it "Mewmew" in the movie. LOL!

Seriously, I could give a flying frack about Jane right now. Fandral is so freaking adorable in this- he needs to have more screen time, if not a movie of his own. But don't give him a bow, etc., because that would be lame. ?

He's teasing Darcy! He's trying to keep from being a burden? Seriously, it doesn't take that many skills to live on this planet- learn how to make mac n' cheese and use an electric beard-trimmer and you're set. He's just swoonable.

"I had the strange desire to hold onto him so tight and stuff him in my closet so he wouldn't leave."

Awwww...poor Darcy.

Also, I love the tweak at the end of the chap. I didn't see that coming- I thought Darcy would be doing some Jane-style pining and searching and angsting and hoping and blah blah blah fishcakes. I'm so relieved that we're skipping that and going straight to Westley's Return: The Boyfriending.

"And There Was A Mighty Ass Kicking."

Best chapter name evar. EVAR. I don't remember this scene in the movie being so funny...

"He replied as he rose to his feet with ease and Jane returned to a standing position. I looked down at my wrist as I tried to figure out how exactly I was supposed to get up without hurting it when suddenly the ground vanished from beneath me and I felt strong arms holding me. I craned my neck to see the Boy Wonder's face in close detail, distracted momentarily by his piercing eyes and his ridiculous Robin Hood goatee."

LOL ::swooooon::::