Reviews for Cruel destiny
xionnevermore chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
That was beautiful! *heart*
Lost Tide and Sea Shells chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Nice job I honestly didn't expect that take - "this is how fast you fall in love"...

Beautiful job. I don't tear up easily, but it's really emotional, makes me feel like I were Takaki brings back memories of that movie...

only one tiny mistake I saw, sixth line from the last: "I stand there and look ate flowers, sigh" - should be "look at the flowers" - but that's really so small...

Anyway, great job! Keep writing :)
Mitama31773 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Hiksu ... My eyes teary when I reached the last line. TT

Nice FF. Keep writing! QQd
yurika16 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
It's so beautiful. I felt like I was Takaki while reading this. Good job! :)
ephemeralspring chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Awesome poem! This is thig already made me cry...
Glint Of Madness chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Heart breaking bro. When I read this I feel so sorry for Takaki. I don't really like Akari now that I have watched the movie, but that is also in due part because Takaki never wrote to her anymore. Jeez this is bringing back bad memories of that movie. Time to go sulk.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
GIRL DIED IN 1993, A MAN BURIED HER IN HER OWN home when she was still alive. The murderer chanted, "Toma sota balcu" as he buried her. Now that you have read the chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night she will stand at the side of your bed starring straight into your eyes. She will suffocate you... like she was suffocated. This story is sadly true. If you post this 5 differnt timesshe will not bother you