|Reviews for Just a Stage Kiss|
| The Impossible Souffle chapter 20 . 1/23
This was amazing, like fantastic, brilliant, amazing. It's writers like you who give me feels :P But again amazing story, good work!
| Nayas-Wankys chapter 20 . 1/13
Amazing, read it all in one day! Love this story!
| kendall chapter 10 . 1/12
why cant jade admit her feelings for tori JORI FOREVES
| ebec chapter 9 . 1/6
they r a cute couple
| Quinntana2 chapter 14 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Awww...Trina is such a great big sister. She truly does love her baby sister. The note was so sweet.
Tori and Jades date was pretty perfect and super cute. I like them talking and getting to know each other instead of fighting( I do enjoy the fighting, sometimes, though:-).
| Quinntana2 chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Jades little rant about the things she hates about Tori was actually kinda cute.
Haha, Jade almost slipped up with the 'I love you'. I wished Tori noticed.
That kiss was intense and in no way can they call it a stage kiss.
Cat is awesome and should just mess with Jade until she relents, and spills her feelings.
| Quinntana2 chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Jade is so deep in denial, it's a bit funny. She's walking around and being dramatically affectionate with Beck while-in my mind-thinking about Tori.
Tori was completely giving away her feelings. I wonder if Jade noticed.
Cat knows something:she's a genius like that. :)(:
| Quinntana2 chapter 5 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Nope, Jadeykins, it's not just a stage kiss. ;-)
I think the emotions are quite realistic. Jade trying to focus on Beck but Tori not going away and the confusion with denial.
Jade was totally checking out Tori's legs.
The description of the kiss made me smile a big smile.
I'm loving, loving this story. :)(:
| Quinntana2 chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Oh, Jade, just cant wait to get her Tori kisses on.
I like the scenario for their scene.
AH! This is good stuff.:)(:
| Quinntana2 chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Jade totally likes Tori.
Jade would never let Beck kiss Tori because she really wants to. Hehe.
I feel a teeny bit bad for Beck but not much. :)(:
| Quinntana2 chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
:)(: You have Cat down perfectly...well, really, everyone is in great character.
Jade messing with Tori's head and teasing her makes me smile.
Jade gives Tori butterflies, cute Jori.
| Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
:)(: Haha..Robbie and Sinjin, sucks for them.
Tori and Jade...YAY!
Sikowitz is so Sikowitz and that's perfect. :)(:
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/20/2013
Oh Hell No! I need the sequel fast! I love this story soooo much. I read it in about 10 hours. I didn't review before cause I was too busy reading chapter after chapter.
This is one of the best Jori fanfictions I've ever read so fat. Keep it up
| SmilerLizbian chapter 20 . 9/13/2013
I love the story...I really can't wait for the sequel...when will that be coming...soon?:D
| Senshi Sun chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This is the first Victorious fic I've read, as well as the first Jori fic I've read. I'm not really too sure what to expect as I never really saw the couple while I was watching the show, but reading some fan theories and ideas online makes the argument for this couple surprisingly strong. I'm hoping you can make me further invested in these two as a pair.
This opening chapter is fairly good plot wise. You cleverly capture Sikowitz's weirdness as you set up the story. It establishes everything I need to know in a short amount of time: what the plot is, how Trina ended up in the hat, and who the couples are. You also insert some good Sikowitz-brand humour.
This story does seem to have a few nitpicks. It feels a little short (clocking in at just under 600 words), but that's probably just because you weren't used to writing long pieces at the time. I'm a touch hesitant about Robbie & Sinjin, but this is chapter 1/20, so my feelings could change. You missed a couple of periods in the line where you explain why Trina's in here.
I hope to read more soon!