Reviews for The Dark Heroes
tatewaki2000 chapter 13 . 8/21
It is an alright story.
Felt more like snippets of something that could have been larger.

Not a lot of plot. And kinda aimless.
But still, thanks for the hour of randomness. Gave me somethin to read.
tatewaki2000 chapter 7 . 8/21
Much better chapter. Pretty sure therapy doesnt work like that though.
tatewaki2000 chapter 6 . 8/21
Wow. This is an ugly chapter.
Tough to read. And felt like you pumped it out carelessly.

tatewaki2000 chapter 4 . 8/21
Ha. Incredibles reference.

Well the chapters are super short. Um. Your writing improved though.
tatewaki2000 chapter 3 . 8/21
Pacing is way off.
But whatevs. It's still a wayyy better chapter than your others.
tatewaki2000 chapter 2 . 8/21
Much beter chapter!
A bit annoying that Naruto is magically a former member of the "League."
But I'm happy you didnt regurgitate or force feed us any flashbacks. *shudders*
tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 8/21

I liked the cookie scene. I like the parts that described stuff, like computer screens...
I think you arr capable of writing really well.

There were some strange spellng errors. Strange capialization. Way too much dialog chunks.
An okay chappy. :3
Guest chapter 13 . 8/3
The timeline is fucked up, I can't follow the story because of the random flashbacks that are chapters you could at least said it was a flashback so people could actually know what was happening, instead you have to guess if it's a flashback or happening now.
Dkadarkness chapter 12 . 7/31
Update this story please..
Alex2909 chapter 13 . 7/31
nice story, like the pairing so far
Xethesis chapter 13 . 7/12
Huh, is thins like a filler or...
iStyx chapter 5 . 6/26
Yeah, I stopped reading after this chapter. Unrealistic, naive and idiotic crap.
XXX Chaos Breaker XXX chapter 13 . 6/20
i think you should bring the league of assassin into this story i think there goal are the same as naruto so you can have naruto work together with them or lead them maybe even bring talia al ghul in to the paring then have her lead the assassins
Deiru Tamashi chapter 13 . 4/18
So that's how Naruto first met Diana. Sounds like the perfect place to have met the Princess and champion of the Amazon's. Though this still does leave unanswered as to WHY the two of them broke up, or even got together to begin with. Well, either way, I still liked this chapter, and look forward to what things will be like with Naruto and Harley going forward. Can't wait to find out.

Post soon!
246vili chapter 13 . 4/11
Thx for the update. Good to know this story isn't dead.
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