Reviews for Taking Chances
Drarry4eva chapter 9 . 3/2/2014
I really am enjoyed this. Really I am. I like how well you brought all their characters out, even Ginny, who I think she just fall in a black hole, no offense, not a fan of hers. Especially when she's not being a very good role model for her children. Being drunk all the time and sleeping with random strange men and bringing them home when her daughter lives with her is just wrong and she shouldn't have full custody of Lily. She should only have supervised rights, that is all, she's not being a good parent. Now, I really think this story needs a beta, you've got a lot grammar and spelling errors. It's good just not all the errors, hopefully you can find a beta. And I really, really hope you will continue this, don't leave it. It bugs me when people leave their stories on hiatus, it's like what's the point. So, please update this soon.
Satele chapter 9 . 2/5/2014
Lovely story, I do enjoy reading your characterizations of everyone! Hope you can update soon!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 9 . 8/25/2013
Great chapter really liked it a lot can’t wait to see what is going to come so please update soon
awesome chapter 9 . 8/23/2013
Yaaaay, holidays with the malfoys!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
Id like a scorpius x albus moment, some in scorpius' pov
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
I like this chapter. It is agood chapter. Please update soon.
hitsugayataichoda chapter 9 . 8/22/2013
Such cute chapters, not that I'm saying the fight scenes are cute, but the other stuff_ can't wait for the next update! Haha
Lori94 chapter 9 . 8/21/2013
Can't wait for more!
Simply.Scarfy chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Oh man, just as amazing as ever. One of my most favourite fics! You're so awesome, it's great to have you writing again:D
anabelM chapter 3 . 8/20/2013
a parente is supposed to teach their kids, teach them values, what is good an bad, talk with them, no give them time and leave them alone. specially teenagers
Kigen Dawn chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Did I mention that I love how their sons bond helps them get closer
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
I can't help but wonder how James is going to react to these plans.
107602 chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Thank you for the update. Albus and Scorpius make cute friends. See you next update. :)
Godiva9 chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Oh the trouble those boys could get into over break! A wonderful chapter, I look forward to more, have fun on your trip! : )
Angelic Snowdrop chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Wow. I have no idea where to start with this review, except to say it's spectacular. EVERYTHING, and I mean everything, is so well-written and thought-out that it actually feels like I'm reading one of JK's books.

The characters and their interactions. Stampeding snakes, I loved them! Scorpius, Albus, James, Harry, Draco. Even Ginny. I could see each one of them saying the same lines your characters did. Honestly, I never really imagined Ginny to be the type that would be content to stay at home, either, and you nailed that conception right on the head. Scorpius and Albus were ADORABLE. And Harry and Draco were refreshingly mature, and their interaction made me laugh!

I like the flow of this story, and how one event links to another without seeming to abrupt. No use of purple prose here, either— really glad I don't read another line of how hawwwwt Draco looks or how his eyes glow or how he looks like a fallen angel. (Shudder, shudder). Everything was simple, direct—to the point. Yet, the build-up was still nicely done.

Overall, this was a very realistic story, and an absolutely fabulous read. Please update! I cannot wait to finish this story, and I look forward to your other works.
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