Reviews for No Place for a Hero
ToscaThorCat chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
YES! MONTY PYTHON REFERENCE! I LOVE THAT MOVIE! SonicWinchester (my best friend, fellow FF author, and accomplice in many crazy acts) and I make a habit of going to the zoo, and in the reptile house, if we see a newt, the person who spots it points at the other, and loudly declares "SHE TURNED ME INTO A NEWT!" shuffles a bit under the weird stares. "I got better."
Laphroaigh chapter 9 . 4/21/2015
Whoa, whoa, wait!
Apollo and Trucy?
Hooooo, this is getting interesting.
NozidJ chapter 7 . 4/3/2015
Is Ned Munny a pun on 'need money'? And is that why he's connected with Viola, 'cause she lent him money? o.O

It just occurred to me hahaha, I probably sound really slow though. Anyway, onto the review.

Your writing style's good and I think you portrayed the characters well. :) I can't wait to read on! The premise is amazing.

I hope to read more of your works!
son-of-heaven176 chapter 26 . 3/10/2015
Excellently written. I do not doubt that you succeeded in meeting your goals for this chapter.
son-of-heaven176 chapter 25 . 3/10/2015
An excellently written chapter, even though it's been so long since the finale. Two fixes:
Near the end, it should be "cruel world," not "cruel word."

Also, it's "forensic scientist," not "forensics scientist"; get rid of the S.
Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 27 . 2/12/2015
Ahhh I am so fangirl squealing at this :3 love it so much :3
Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 25 . 2/12/2015
:D aaah I am so happy you updated this :3 was a welcome surprise
SammySpartan chapter 24 . 7/29/2013
Hey are you gonna make a sequel? This was a great story, and I'd like to see more.
son-of-heaven176 chapter 24 . 3/10/2013
Wow. Definitely not your typical Phoenix Wright fare. However, it is nonetheless enjoyable (occasional language notwithstanding); it is a realistic vision of the emotions that someone like Phoenix might go through.

Sorry to nit-pick, but there's one glaring error. The timestamp should read PM, not AM. Otherwise, this takes place before the previous chapter, not after!
son-of-heaven176 chapter 16 . 3/10/2013
WOW. Heavy stuff. Now I understand why you said that this is "Phoenix Wright noir." Even the Apollo Justice cases were not this heavy!

Nonetheless, what I've seen so far was well-written; it is up to the readers' tastes whether this is an acceptable deviation from the norm or some abominable perversion of their beloved Phoenix Wright. Myself, I lean towards the former of the two opinions, and I want to see how this story ends. Onto the next chapter!
son-of-heaven176 chapter 13 . 3/10/2013
Oops, gotta correct a "correction" I made in the previous chapter: "grisly," not "gristly". (In other words, no T.)
son-of-heaven176 chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
So far, so good. The characters are recognizable, and the storytelling is very good. I have only one nit-pick on this chapter: It's "gristly," not "grizzly."
vodkaCanidae chapter 24 . 6/11/2012
Wow. This is a masterpiece! I love how beautifully the plot twists and turns and rounds up so smoothly! I can totally imagine this to be the grand finale to the Ace Attorney series! The characters and their emotions were all portrayed brilliantly! I could feel all those gut-wrenching sorrow, indecision and awkwardness. Your writing style was really pleasant to read, and the way you spun out the plot was so well done I could not stop reading! Bravo! This is truly a wonderful fic! Thank you so very much for writing this! I loved it!
Guest chapter 14 . 5/28/2012
Of my god! When came across this story, I somehow knew that staying up late despite running a 39.7C fever so I could read your work was a good idea.

I cannot even begin to comprehend how wrong I was.

With my head pounding, my eyes bloodshot and watery and my body somehow shivering and burning at the same time; I say to you, it was, IS not a good idea.

It was an AMAZING one.

Right now, I am in so much pain, but all of that seems so unimportant compared to this excitement coursing through my veins somehow brought about by your work. You've portrayed the imperfections of the characters so well it's like I'm rediscovering the Ace Attorney franchise all over again. You made me remember why I loved the game so much :')

If I could, I would review each and every chapter, but my head keeps trying to commit suicide so much it isn't even funny anymore; I'm not even sure if this one makes sense, to tell you the truth.

CONGRATULATIONS. You just made a very sick person stay up an hour or so later than what her parents think. You also made her want to stay up even later.
doctor bow tie chapter 24 . 5/5/2012
that is the best story i ever read.I mean realy it can't get better
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