Reviews for Rem's Chimera
Frost D. Zen chapter 9 . 10/9/2017
Continue please.
fandom gurl chapter 9 . 8/21/2014
Plz update
Mak3sh1ft chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
I just recently watched this anime . It seems not many people know about it but its such a great show. I really enjoyed reading this. I just wish you would've continued it.
FatalMissy13 chapter 8 . 11/16/2012
Love it! Update soon please!
Guest chapter 8 . 10/18/2012
Write more! Great story :)
animefreak653 chapter 8 . 10/9/2012
Ooooooh love! I do hope she picks Thor. But then again, she hasn't even spent a lot of time with the guy!
AliceXxX chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
Being the biggest Zagi fan in the world, i like how this story SORT OF focuses on him:) I like Thor til he got older:) Well anyways, update soon xD
Guest chapter 7 . 3/4/2012
Ahh I wish you would have kept the story going because I LOVE it :)

Rem is awesome and I love Zagi
LadyxAbsinthe chapter 7 . 2/26/2012
I am loving this story I can't wait to find out what happens next time!
LadyAbsinthe chapter 7 . 2/9/2012
I love your story and look forward to reading more,the only problem I have is that it could use a bit more discriptive writing. Otherwise it's awesome!
bluedevil77 chapter 7 . 1/21/2012
I still love your story, and I hope that you continue to write chapters. :D
bluedevil77 chapter 6 . 1/21/2012
Hi! I love you're story! Its awesome, :)
PleiadesWolfe chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
Rem and Yui are so cute together. Is it bad that I want her to pick Yui over Thor and Zagi?
stephie chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Sry! I didn't mean to review chapter 1 but the story as a whole ch. 1-7. I'm sure you have a way to erase that if you want. Anyway, review was sent!
stephie chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Hey~ I like where you're going with this and it's an enjoyable read. Not to mention the series was to d**n short. Though Zagi is a touch on the OOC side, you have developed him much more than Thor. Though this shift in character does bring to my mind that in the series Zagi's personality seemed much kinder and more even keel when he was first introduced than when he when he came back at the end of the series. It makes you wonder where the change happened or if it was some aspect of his character we didn't see or if it is his way of rising to personal or political conflict. Though I'm sure had he had spent more time with Thor, as per your story, his personality would have encountered a shift similar to what you have shown. Lets face it, its not in Thor's character to allow bullies! So I would consider the OOC break ok in many a situation. Though I think you got Thor's character down to a T and your prose does show some skill and pretty fun to read. I really like it when you get into Zagi's head, its very entertaining. But I think an area where you shine is with describing your characters and your dialog. The only other thing that bothered me was the rape in Rem's backstory. It blind sided me because there was no build up in any of the previous chapters or much more than a passing hint of any tragic event in her past or what her colony was like. I'm sure there was more than just one passing hint, i could probably find it if I looked again, but it seemed like we were just suddenly seeing Rem develop PTSD symptoms. I also noticed you had and entire chapter devoted to Rem reacting to memories of her past in relation to her new environment. I'm not making note that this is a bad thing, it just had a very different tone from any of the other chapter. But the bright side of this is that I do see a scheme developing, each chapter covers a monumental event of Rem's life on chimera. I'm sure you can find many creative was to spin this. So hurry up and keep writing, you've got readers to please! ;~)