Reviews for Betrayal II
Borello chapter 18 . 2/24
damnit. this story sounds interesting and you don't finish the story.
Ryuuohjin chapter 18 . 1/3
Taiki no Hitsuzen Kage chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
Okay plot, punctuation needed. Characters too puppet-like, lifeless, with no personality.
my 2 guys chapter 18 . 4/3/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
kevinlentz239 chapter 17 . 8/3/2016
need lemons and let hinata and fu find out about what a pervert the pervy sage is first hand. get the feudal lord to find out that konoha has put a bounty out on naruto and have a meeting with councils and the feudal lord. does naruto love hinata or is it a friendship? how serious is naruto and fu? is it love? are they dating? will it get more intimate? do you have an update schedule prepared?
kyuubinovelli chapter 12 . 1/7/2016
good story. spelling mistakes really make it hard to read. I always thought ninjas used chakra not charka.
Shadow .X. Heart chapter 18 . 6/21/2015
like the story but have you abandon it or move to another site?
Crimson wolf and nightsnake chapter 18 . 6/14/2015
Dragonkblood chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Will there be more chapter's to come or are you done?
CosmicBeing chapter 2 . 11/21/2014
Shove it up your ass canon lover.
Sezu chapter 8 . 12/10/2013
I noticed many spelling and grammar errors but I shouldn't be talking I can't write very well my self
fictionelement777 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Please make more of this and tayuya and hinata enslavement good stories!
246vili chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
C'mon man. Don't keep us waiting for so long please.
Potterformers chapter 11 . 9/3/2013
So you've got two Fu's: Fu the Jinchuriki and Fū of Root
dat guy chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
hurry da up i must read more
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