Reviews for Scorched Space
jabbarulez chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
how will the asari react to this shift in forces? can't wait for more!
Titus Tatius chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
Certainly an intriguing story so far. Mass Effect mixed with a bit of 40k grimdark.

I look forward to reading more.
Duke Edwin the 3rd chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
can't wait to see where this is going. good work on the space combat just have 1 nitpick g's are a unit of acceleration not velocity.
Cyanios chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
Very AU, but also very good:D can't wait to see where this little Warhammer 40k bloob goes:D
bladerunner89 chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
wow this certainly has a Warhammer 40K vibe to it, i am definitly looking forwards to more.
Pride of ZAFT chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
A Citadel government without a Citadel is certainly intriguing but without mass relays as well? I don't see that as possible with the Vanguards destroying more than a small amount of relays, but I look forward to seeing what you come up with

Hilarious jibe at windows at the end with the flawed OS possibly destroying a valuable relic. Thirteen versions later and still with bugs to work out.