Reviews for Heatwave
Kaizer-Kid chapter 1 . 7/27
Love how Aveline got the last laugh on everyone, you nailed everyone and your characterization of Hawke was amazing and amusing, he felt like the most vibrant character there, when usually Anders and Merrill are in DA2. Nice work, you deserve all the praise in the world, for this little oneshot.
Madam Grey chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
*fans self* What a wonderful way to warm up a chilly day. I loved Isabela and Varric in this. You nailed them perfectly. And of course, Merrill and Hawke were super cute haha. This was a very interesting idea, I really enjoyed reading this.

The descriptions near the started to get a bit jumbled, such as this:

"You are just jealous" was what she meant to say. She didn't get further than the 'You' however, suddenly feelimh a pair of hands around her waist and being lifted off the table, deposited in front of Varric. Looking to Hawke's hands retreating to his side of the table Isabella blinked. "...are strong."

Thanks for writing!
Ledilettant chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Hilarante, pauvre Hawke victime de sa carrure.