|Reviews for Blank Slate|
| zemmeline chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
Oooohh maan. You're only 5 chapters in, but holy jesus, this is probably the best Code Geass fics I've read ever. The quality of your writing makes me tingle, which I hope you interpret as dirty, because I mean it. I'm loving the characterization AND THE STORY SO FAR whoa. Hoping the next chapter will be up soon! :)
| mikako17 chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
This is such an interesting fic, and I really enjoy it even though Lelouch in here definitely angers me slightly at points. His choice to lie/betray Suzaku in this way is very difficult for me to reconcile with my idea of who Lelouch is, which is someone who tries his hardest to not hurt the few people he cares about. I can't wait to read more of this.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/29/2013
KEEP GOING! AHHHHHH!
| Wenxi chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
Wow. I love how you write Suzaku. His relationships with other people are really well written, especially with Lelouch.
Lelouch is really in character too. I could completely see him using this for his advantage, and quietly caring. Brilliant fic, and I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see Suzaku in action again :)
| GothicDebby chapter 5 . 9/8/2012
Althought I got a question: is this going to be slash?
I kinda cannot wait to see them properly kiss and loose control, for this butterfly to fly in susaku stomach ;)
| GothicDebby chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
I love this story! very much!
Will you update soon?
It's brilliant, and a great idea.
| Alcorion chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Awesome fic! Very IC! Really great work you've created. Hopefully you'll update soon!
| ame no itteki chapter 5 . 8/18/2012
Quite a bitter sweet chapter in my opinion. It just made me feel a whole mixed up emotions for them. Just wow. I can't wait to see some action in this. Miss seeing Suzaku in action...
| CoGaShA chapter 5 . 8/17/2012
Amazing story, thier love is like a thriller because it has me sitting at the edge of my seat. Cant wait for an update :) update soon.
| Rapid Puzzleshipper Saiko chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
AH! I want more this is soooooooooo good.
I'm intrested in know whether or not this takes place in the actual series and lelouch is just taking advatage of the memory loss to get what he wants or whether or not Lelouch is not lying at all...
Its very good, and well written, update soon!
| ixloco chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Wheeeee yes! This update really made my day. Thank you for doing so.
As usual your written interaction between Suzaku and Lelouch just felt right, I love how Suzaku plays a more aggresive role in their 'relationship' and how you wrote Lelouch's answers - like his reluctant lies mixed with guilt - his sentence to Suzaku's last question in this chapter is somewhat sweet.
Another thing that's played well is how you made the storage house where they used to stay at caught in a landslide while Suzaku's old house stand strong, the analogy that I got is quite nice. It's as if Lelouch has his past with Suzaku erased, while Suzaku will just move on -yes I'm reading too much into this haha
Anyway, great job. Keep it up, will be looking forward to the next one :D
| Mr Stereo1 chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
This... was interesting. I'm not really sure what my dominant emotional state was reading this, but I'm glad I did, at least. There's a lot of turmoil, but I love that Lelouch's flaws are shown so prominently in this story. He turns into a god mode sue far too often for my liking in the fandom, so this crueler, more domineering, take on his personality is a nice change. Although in this chapter, his more caring side is starting to show through, which is also good for the character IMHO. Attempts to appeal to high school aged viewers aside, the contrast between Lelouch as caretaker/friend at Ashford with Nunnally and Suzaku, to Lelouch as ruthless revolutionary/rebel prince were what made a lot of the series worth watching for me. And, of course, the glimpses of the Other when the two roles collide.
Of course he still has, um, more practical flaws even when he's trying to be nice - in execution if nothing else - which are also a neglected part of canon Lelouch I'm happy to see here.
Also, I'm starting to think that Lelouch is telling the truth about a pre-existing relationship. Whether it's true or not I don't have the information to say, certainly if it was then no-one but themselves (that readers such as myself have seen) knows about it. (And are Lelouch and Suzaku gay in this story? Going on the constant feinting in canon there's precedent for just about every pairing involving either of them. I tried to come up with an exception, but aside from characters Suzaku/Lelouch never meet like Clovis or Darlton I can come up with reasons better than crack pairing for everyone I've thought of... that scares me.)
| Persephone1 chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
Ah, Suzaku and Lelouch interacting, this is what I'd been waiting for!
You got Kallen's character down. I loved the argument she had with Zero with all it's double meaning (for they definitely weren't talking about Knightmares). Her concerns are legitimate, and she's right in the fact that bringing Suzaku into the fold is selfish and entirely self-serving on Lelouch's part. From day one, he wanted Suzaku on his side, and Lelouch bore all the risks to make that happen. And when Kallen calls him out on the "test drive", it was amusing how angry and rattled Zero got, especially when he's normally so calm. She did get a bit...bitchy at the end, but I think it's understandable because she IS jealous, even if she'd never admit it, probably worried about getting replaced, and just hurting.
The visit to the mansion was a bit depressing. Suzaku was looking for a connection in all the wrong places. Kururugi Shrine is an important part of his past, but not that house. That house is empty.
Lelouch's reaction to Suzaku's kiss was...interesting. Shocked and stiff, like it's never happened before (which I'm still under the opinion that it hasn't). But since Lelouch claims that they had sex, I'm not entirely sure. He has no reason to say that they did, for it wouldn't be surprising for a month old relationship to not have gotten that far.
With Lelouch's reaction to Suzaku's question of whether or not they were in love, I'm wondering if it was Suzaku's feelings he is uncertain of, his own, or both.
I can't wait for the next chapter, although I fear I'm going to have to wait a long time for it. Oh well. You're worth it. :)
| Borderss chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
Oh, this hurts. For both Suzaku and Lelouch.
I wonder what's going to happen between them.
Gah! Can't wait to read more.
| J.F.C chapter 5 . 8/13/2012
I love the development in this chapter, especially at the end.