Reviews for This Time as a Namikaze |
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![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for making me laugh so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Entertaining story so far. Though it's yet another time travel story where Naruto acts all familiar with Hinata after coming back, when in reality he has never knowingly interacted with her before. Don't the writers understand that it comes off as rather creepy? And Henge IS a true transformation. And it's a ninjutsu not genjutsu. |
![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter straight had tears in my eyes for the entire story of the Uzumaki and their stand. Shit was absolutely primo. Love that you made them busted af so that they’re on par/ better than the SenjuUchiha. Shout out to the ginger gods |
![]() ![]() ![]() This shtick is s just getting old and repetitive now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you'd have focused a bit more on the dialog. The characters just don't sound like themselves at times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story itself, but it's almost unreadable. Your paragraphs are too long. You don't start new paragraphs like you should when you change who is speaking, and you also don't make sense. Why would he have his adult libido? Just because he had his memories doesn't mean he carried over his physical brain development. He also wouldn't have trouble moving because that's muscle memory, not normal memory. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol this chapter is gold |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fucking love it!xD can't wait to see what will happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a moment I forgot that there were just going into naruto's room |
![]() ![]() Why tf do so many fics make henge a genjutsu, literally every single time it's shown in canon it has been completely physical |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greetings and salutations! Here's hoping that this review finds you well! I must say, I enjoyed reading this fic, and while I am looking forward to more chapters, I am hoping that this fic isn't actually dead, merely on hiatus while you deal with life, liberty, and the pursuit of hopefully happiness in your life! I am hoping that your muse hasn't deserted you in regards to this fic, but I understand if that is so...as a fellow author who has let his fic languish, I am hopeful that one day I will be able to get back to it eventually...again, here's hoping that this finds you well, and if not writing here, then maybe on another site...if that is the case, I would enjoy reading your works there. Indeed, if on another site, I would ask that you PM me to let me know what site so I can continue to enjoy your writing. |
![]() ![]() Why did you portray the shinagomy as Death. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you had continued this story. this had me dying of laughter every chapter. it's so hood and ill be rereading it constantly. |
![]() ![]() So basically naruto took a bunch of drugs and steroids and he got so much chakra that the whole continent could feel it... dam |