Reviews for Road Trip
taytay chapter 1 . 2/17
It's really cute
MyLifeAsAWhitlock chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Damn...That was awesome
Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Truly loved this very much. My only wish is that there was more. It was so enjoyable. Love these two together.
angel897 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
i like it
I Am Blueberry chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I love this story! Please continue it! It was amazing!
LilyAurora chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Really enjoyed your story

good work

x
Irish Charm chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
It was a great story.
Mxpi1970 chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I loved this story...want móre you can just leave it there Please write more :D
KrittleTwilighted chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I would love to see this and a few of your other o/s turned into full stories.
Team Angels chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
ok i am not dissing the story but I feel a little affended about the way you think people from texas talk.

In here you had words like smilin' jumpin' gazin' tuggin' blushin'

Are you seeing a pattern? It felt like every other verb was shortened. we don't talk like that. I would slow it down on the -n's other than that it was a good story
twilightmenrhot chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Well done and certainly plausible. In cannon Edward and Alice have the tendency to smother their mates. Perhaps this is how it should have been.

I enjoyed this piece but feel it is only the beginning...
Caerylin chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
omg hot and awesome!
NatalieLynn chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Really great story! I hope you decide to continue it after the contest is over. Odd picture choice though, I thought this story fit photo #2 better (aside form the introductory paragraphs).
Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Awesome one-shot, I loved it. Keep up the great work. You should think about making this longer when the contest is over.

Dani
Sonja Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
I hope that this is not going to be a short story; this is actually a great introduction to the adventures of Jasper and Bella.
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