|Reviews for and steal the sun|
| Carlmike chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
At the risk of sounding like a spoiled brat: I want moore :(
| xSapphireLightsx chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
For a small piece this has a great amount of detail. It's the detail that pulls me in with the way it tells that scene in the game in a completely new and descriptive view. Everything Trip feels is written down perfectly that you can really get what is going on inside her head and how terrified she is of Monkey. The last line actually gave me a chill.
I hope you do consider doing other vignettes, because if there's anything like this they're sure to be epic Heck of Enslaved had been a novel, likely it would've been like this.
Keep up the great writing!
| DeathByMonkees chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
Daaaamn, that was really good! It's weird, but I'd never really thought about what happened when Trip put the headband on Monkey. What she thought at that precise moment. This was just awesome! :D This was written with a lot of tension and sense of urgency and it was just magnetic. It sucked me into the story, into your text, after the first sentence. And such nice character thingy about Trip too, that she thinks with her fingers, never slowing down. Really really good!
Please write more chapters to this story, this was thouroughly awesome and I wanna read more!
| SkItZoFrEaK chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
I love this story! I sincerely hope that you continue with it, because your characterization of Trip and her first impression of Monkey is clever, intelligent, and extremely sympathetic. I really like the moment when she thinks about his tattoos in terms of 'branding livestock' and how this helps her do what she's doing. It shows her morality at war with her fear and desperation. I am really intrigued with what other moments in the game you will chose to portray. Even if you give up here, it's a great piece. But I'm rooting for more!
| mythstoorfoot chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Oh lawdy, I just loved this. Flawless description, an unparalleled look into Trip's nature and her past, and just so wonderfully poetic. This has got to be some of the best Enslaved fanfic on the site. I think you got both of their personalities down perfectly, and it all just ties into the game so smoothly that I cannot help but weap tears of joy. :D
A short taste, but I can't get enough! I really, really hope you update! :)
| Pookyilicous chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
can't wait for more :D
| Ramos chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Excellent start. I love this game, these characters, and most of all the humanity remaining in them when the world and events conspire to reduce their humanity to its lowest levels. I look forward to more!
| DioIsDead chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
very interesting way to describe trips point of view. hope you will write more!
| Unlisshed chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Wow, it's great to see a new fic on here!
Really good so far, I love how you've portrayed Trip, it's easy to find her annoying if you don't know how her mind works, and I think you've done that perfectly.
I'm really looking forward for more! :)