Reviews for Things Never Work Out The Way You Want Them To
Dr Hir chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Heartbreaking. Such a well written story. I still have tears.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
dumb ass jane the marriage wnot work
DianeB chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
It's a little bit evident that you didn't have a beta, but that didn't distract from the enjoyment (and sadness) of this story. It doesn't seem outside the realm of possibility, either.
yankee77 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Why Jane why? Why would she let Maura go like that? Come on you know you want to write more;-)
Raiderslight chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Very well written and great emotion shown by both of hte characters, my only complaint is that there isn't a second chapter...yep pretty bummed by that. Of course you could make a girl very happy and say that there will be?
herlovethawedthefrozenheart chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
This was beautifully done and incredibly sad. And pardon my language when I say that Jane is a complete fucking dumbass.
Miss Nowhere chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
So sad