Reviews for Before the Bullets fly
Carla chapter 40 . 1/3
Really good chapter yet again. So glad you finally updated :). Tbh getting really pissed off with Billy's attitude towards Drake, surely if he loved his sister he would support her even though he hates Drake
Carla chapter 39 . 6/15/2014
Really enjoying how the story is progressing and very excited to see how it ends. Glad to see Billy starting to see some sense by not forbidding Riley from seeing Drake.
lauraxxx chapter 38 . 4/22/2014
FUUUUUUCKKKKK :0 Mmy stomach was in my throat for a second when you Jaz said she'd died! Not a cool way to play with your readers lol!

Loved how Billy and Drake were working together buy you slipped in some still obvious tension and unresolved issues in there! Awesome job, I wonder if they'll ever truly sort their shit out or if this bitter snarling truce is as good as it gets? I can't wait to find out.

Tyse really didn't have a clue what was coming, seemed to think he was gonna wiggle his way out of it right up until the last moment... boy was he wrong! Totally got what he deserved, and I loved how you played the sceene out with the last sentence being 'B street had been well and truly sentenced' AWESOME!

As always your writing was incredibly detailed and beyond anything I could ever hope to produce. Fantastic work.

The second half of this chapter had me rooting for Riley to be okay majorly, just knowing how distraught Billy, Drake and of course Joe would be if something happened to her is enough to make you wan to read on as quickly as possible to find out if she's okay.

Loved Billy thanking Drake with no witnesses about haha so Billy!

As always loved it, and cannot wait until for Cage to get his bloody just dues.

:)
Carla chapter 38 . 4/20/2014
Good to be Billy and Drake, putting their differences aside to deal with B-Street and look after Riley. I doubt it will last though. Looking forward to more chapters. More Ryder please! x
Carla chapter 37 . 2/20/2014
So glad that Riley was able to stop Drake and Billy just in time. Though I'm completely a Jack's fan girl so I wanted Drake to kill Billy. I'm sorry but I never liked him *hides*. Hoping Riley gets better soon and Billy sees sense
hoppnhorn chapter 37 . 2/2/2014
Okay, so here's what I think. I'm SO GLAD it was Riley that broke up that fight. No one looked weaker than the other. That was good. I will admit, Billy is still driving me bonkers. He needs to just get the hell over Riley lying. Seriously, the heart wants what it wants. It's not a matter of logic. She didn't lie to them because she was being malicious and juvenile, she lied because she knew what would happen. HELL, it happened anyway. [aka bloody punch fest] I'm ready for the boys to just GROW UP and realize that their best interests lie in HELPING ONE ANOTHER. those big idiots. and I'd like Gunner to be shirtless while helping...PFF, just kiddin. but seriously. ;) SO GOOD. I want those B Street idiots to rot. and I'm curious about how this whole Bones thing is gonna work out. I mean, Riley was nearly killed by her own father...Does that mean she'll marry into the Jacks? see those question marks, that's me dropping a massive hint. QUEEN RILEY. amen. Love you girl 3
hoppnhorn chapter 36 . 2/2/2014
Okay A. I love you. B. I suck at falling behind on this story. and C. I am really fucking pissed at Billy right now. I mean, can the man just get over it already and let sleeping dogs lie? [I think that's the expression] For real though, he is being a completely pigheaded asshat. And I'm not thrilled about this fight. The only way this doesn't end in tears is if Drake wins, and doesn't kill Billy. I MEAN...that's not even a good place to end at either. Because Billy can't lose at anything, let's be honest. And he's in fighting shape vs. poor Drake who just came back from the goddamn dead only to get beat to a pulp a second time. FUCCCK. okay. You've got me really worked up. WHAT IF RILEY BREAKS IT UP. oh goodness. Look what you're doing to me. JUST LOOK. Ps: Gunner is my sex god. ohh boy.
I love this story, I missed this. Thank you for reviewing for me, my love. It got me back on FF and reading! And now I'm going on to the nextttt. Love yaaa. 3
lauraxxx chapter 37 . 2/2/2014
Just wow! :o

You seriously do not do things by half do you girly?! That was one tense ass chapter... Jesus, my stomach was in my throat the whole time.
Loved the line about Billy and Riley mastering their vicious smirks, making sure nobody forgot them!

My god that fight sceene was rough, I could notcall it for a second I just really wanted t smash both their heads together and force them to form a truce. The fight sceene was so well written and detailed it lterally blew my mind- You are incredible at what you do.

My heart broke when Billy was being a prick tto Riley. Yu can't help who you fall in love with. You wrote Billy's realaization of Riley not being by his side fantastically.

I'm so eager to see how well this truce works... update soon :) PUHHHHLEEEEAAAASEEE

As always an amazing chapter! Seriously worth the wait.
:) D x
redhedlund chapter 37 . 2/2/2014
Holy fuck! I'm sorry to only review after two chapters not doing it, but everybody got their own flaws!

You had me so tense here, I was like: no way! Make them stop! They can't fight like that! She's going to hate one of you if you carry on!
But she woke up! It was so fucking perfect, like I don't even know how to process it in my mind! I'm also thinking about doing fanmixes for your fic, because I've got many ideas and you're inspiring me to do one or two!

I was re-reading your fic btw, and it's really good, seriously like, I can't wait for the b-streets to be buried six feet under!
Carla chapter 36 . 1/22/2014
Ooooo love this chapter. I hope Drake kicks Billy's ass. How dare he think he can control Riley, she is her own person and can do what she wants plus Billy did sod all to protect her from Bones or any of the others who beat the crap out of her. What sort of brother is that. I'm 100% team Jacks. I hope you don't kill off Drake or I'll be having words with you haha x
lauraxxx chapter 36 . 12/31/2013
Billy is a such a babe. I think it's love, truly! Lol.

Loved the angry quips between the two rival gangs, was excellent watching them all try and hold their tempers in check!

Joe with Riley was so sweet, I was hnestly nearly tearing up!

Drake and Bbilly cant fight to the death, it will break Riley! Neither of them are thinking things through properly.

Cannot wait for your next update!

D x
lauraxxx chapter 35 . 12/31/2013
Billy Billy BILLY! :D

Cain most deffo gt what was coming to him.

Cant wait to see Bbilly reaction to his little sister and ofcourse the new king!

Flawless as always
D x
lauraxxx chapter 34 . 12/31/2013
I seriously hope Cain meets his maker, in a bloody painful way too, after what he'd put Riley through!

Hooray Riley's safe - loved how she stood her ground and protetcted her family right until the end. The sal water being thrown over her open wounds was awful, it really showed how strong she was that she didnt break fro that. You write her perfectly and effortlessly, she is pure kick ass!

Can't wait to read Riley and Drakes reunion :D
Loved this chapter soooo much!
D x
lauraxxx chapter 33 . 12/31/2013
We need a Billy Darley sex sceene, even if it does mess up the story flow and is completely irrelevant to the story lol!

Drake is seriously got some balls. He's a hard motherfucker, I would definitely not want to get on his bad side!

The description in this chapter excellent, I really felt like I was here with them.

D x
lauraxxx chapter 32 . 12/31/2013
OMG Drake was so nuts doing that to get his information. But I guess he was doing it for someone he loves, we can all relate to that.

Gunner is a crazy bitch- s'all im saying! aha.

Beautifully written - I can't believe I went so long without reading this story.

D x
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