|Reviews for Cinders on a Jay's feather|
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
| Breanna chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
| Fireflame duh chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
MORE PLZ! ALWAYS SOME CLIFFYS!
| Dragonflame chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
I want 2 point out that jayfeather hates like every one
| Fireflame chapter 3 . 4/2/2012
Is that it ?
| Flame fire chapter 3 . 3/29/2012
Make another chap ! Love the story ! ;p
| Nyarp chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
... Why would Lionblaze try to kill his own brother? I didn't except to go full out brutal. :S
| HereToHelpImproveWriting chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
i dot like cliffhangers...
okay, i lied i do hurry next chapter this has great potential
| Crowfeather's girl chapter 3 . 7/23/2011
ah! ok I know I forgot that I was writing about a blind kitty! jeez I'll fix it and chpt 2
| Ashlight11 chapter 3 . 7/22/2011
Well this was definatelya future for the brothers if Jay doesn't go after Briar. The second chapter was a big confusing, I thought Jay and Cider were dreaming? And in three, how can Jay's sight be blurry if he's blind?Keep writing, it's good. Next comes big bad Firestar!
| HUNy56JAY chapter 3 . 7/22/2011
NNNNOOOO Jayfeather almost died and Firestar found out is secret
| HereToHelpImproveWriting chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
hurrry, next chapter your doing great!
| Starheart15 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
This is really good! More plz!
| Iceshadow911247 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
| AlphaOmega314 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Omg this is so cool, please keep writing!