|Reviews for Cinders on a Jay's feather|
| Brambles Fur chapter 3 . 2/14/2016
Ohhhhh. This is soo sad . , .
| River-Chan456 chapter 3 . 8/18/2015
this is cute :3 i like it.
| 42 4ever chapter 3 . 3/29/2015
(Kills Lionblaze) That is for hurting my Jayfeather. :3 Your powers are no match for my Author Powers!
| cookiesong123 chapter 2 . 7/19/2014
OOOOOO SNAP DO NOT HURT JAYFEATHER! HES BLIND YOU IDIOTIC PIECE OF MOUSE DUNG! GOD DONT DO IT OR ELSE I WILL KILL YOU LIONBLAZE! I NEVER LIKED YOU ANYWAY! HOLLYLEAF IS BETTER,LION-DUNG! XD
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
Um no offense but,
WHERE THE HELL IS THE STORY -.-?!
| BrairXjay Fan chapter 3 . 5/20/2014
OH MY GOSH! KEEP GOING!
| BrairXJay Fan chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
wow! its so good! keep going!
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
| Breanna chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
| Fireflame duh chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
MORE PLZ! ALWAYS SOME CLIFFYS!
| Dragonflame chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
I want 2 point out that jayfeather hates like every one
| Fireflame chapter 3 . 4/2/2012
Is that it ?
| Flame fire chapter 3 . 3/29/2012
Make another chap ! Love the story ! ;p
| Nyarp chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
... Why would Lionblaze try to kill his own brother? I didn't except to go full out brutal. :S
| HereToHelpImproveWriting chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
i dot like cliffhangers...
okay, i lied i do hurry next chapter this has great potential