Reviews for Crescent Moon Academy
loganhunter2 chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
I like it and I am glad that naruto is not being a saint like tsukune. ...not saying lemon galore but just glad that he doesn't live with an ice shower strapped to his pants. He had goddess after him and nothing. ...though who the childhood friend has very intriguing possibilities 9/10
loganhunter2 chapter 6 . 6/5/2014
THAT RIGHT THERE IS DIFFERENT, AWESOME dude I did not see that at all I new you were gonna pull the hierarchy of the vampire but to put the uchiha at the top and Sakura at the middle was surprisingly awesome the only way to top that is that sasuke is a she and it happens next chapter 10/10 great story this needs to be higher it the list
loganhunter2 chapter 5 . 6/5/2014
8/10
loganhunter2 chapter 4 . 6/5/2014
Still an ino fan but you redeemed Sakura at the end. ..
Hinata freaked me the fuck out though 8/10
loganhunter2 chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Sorry dude but you made a mistake in in putting ino since I'm a naruino shipper so either make it a harem or ...nothing it's your story i just really like naruto and Ino together XD 1000/10 that was adorable in the end
loganhunter2 chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
Now I'm interested in the story since you took the the blueprint for the story and made something new , congrats I like it. ...make it a harem. ...9/10
loganhunter2 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
I read the manga for rosario and I must say that the only weird thing is kushina being strangely close to naruto but the concept seems nice. ...i wanna read a good narusaku since most seem depressing and stuff but this seems fun though as much as I like Sakura she's not hot enough to be a vampire. ..maybe tayuya or ino 8/10
Zero00Heroes chapter 32 . 5/28/2014
love the chapter first of all and nice how you introduced Yakumo to the world. i really like how your going with this story but if can make a request? i see you are following the anime version of Rosario Vampire and while i liked the anime fine could you make the Crescent Moon Academy world a little bit more serious like Rosario's manga. while i love comedy as much as the next writer/reviewer it tends to cause lack of interest after a while and I'm beginning to notice the comedy taking a front seat and the plot getting moved to the back. by the way I'm a new writer to the site and I've just began my first story SOLDIER and i would like opinion of an experienced writer. please and thank you
Guest chapter 32 . 5/28/2014
Please continue to write crescent moon. I really enjoy it
Zanza chapter 32 . 5/28/2014
Don't worry about it Tachman. Apparently some people's brain turn off when they see an interaction between two people and immediately assume that's the pairing and completely ignore the previous chapters and the plot. You've been doing a great job with this fantastic story and ignore the people who don't have good reading comprehension. That's their fault and not yours. Your writing style is easy to read and understand. You're one of the few writers that actually sucks me into its universe and completely get drawn in to the AU Naruto characters. I can easily visualize what's going on with your story and the interactions between Naruto and the girls has me smiling all the time due to the humor and shenanigans between them all. Hopefully this doesn't discourage you from continuing the story as I want to see this story finish and I know you have the capability to do it.
Guest chapter 30 . 5/28/2014
Oh I thought this was narusaku...
Akamatt chapter 32 . 5/27/2014
Nice chapter, can't wait for more.
NaruSaku24 chapter 32 . 5/27/2014
I would hope that you would finish this fic prior to your other project.
KIDLOCO chapter 32 . 5/27/2014
still writing there I mean continue with that and the segonku too

and little lost in the begun of that chapter but like it oh boy.. he going to get problem with the girls about yakumo (one the girls naruto meet in the anime and manga?)
guest chapter 32 . 5/27/2014
oh i get it now yakumo created a different world with her magic for her and naruto but her demon took over her mind and naruto killed it i had to read this twice so i can figure it out that naruto is not yakumo's boyfriend you should pm everyone to read it carefully so they don't make stupid judgement calls
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