Reviews for Crescent Moon Academy
DharkStom28 chapter 29 . 6/20/2013
nice chapter.

on the AN it happens to all don't worry to much as long as you can continue the story I don't mind what you do. I don't know why people are complaining about sakura personality, I personally like her in this story infact I love her personality in this story and think it fits her very well. what I really hope you don't do is change her personality to that of canon sakura that would be a grave mistake I cannot stand canon sakura anymore and her canon personality. it only make things worser for her to me... what ever you do .. please don't do that
raidersfan777 chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
Temari is now my favorite character she is hilarious I can't wait for the next chapter update soon please. :)
kidloco chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
kawaii neko Shizune kawaii and you dont had idea how im crazy about catgirls o nekos girls hehe and dint said beforewas because im not that fan of Shizune but there she is amazing neko mew :D

the rest i love it, welcoem abck wiht new chapter and i wait and dont rewrite the whole chapter or fanfic, maybe fix the sakura personality but still like how you did here, maybe work desde her trasformation, maybe there yyou can work wiht sakura personality and wiht her sister help, well is a idea, but like it how she was, yeah i miss her temper but somehow you dont had change much, maybe to much inocent but maybe in her transformation she may open more of helself (i fault her sisters protection hahaha) and there we can see more of our favortie sakura from the manga, but not mucuh i think need some work there, but not to the begun, or maybe, is just i love how you did hasta now, maybe had be a mistake but same time i think was cool if she a vampire and she need control her temper and ect, but maybe the trasformation she may be more free of that, is just a idea :p, or maybe change, but rewriting but change the sakura parts and maybe naruto interaction, but not much, i do that sometimes mostly when i write from my notebook to word, i make more things i didnt write thre i make it there or after i write it and begun to fix the grammar or ect i see something need more and re write that only part and ect, ok i may rewrite like not tomorro but lol you get my idea XD

i think about other royect of yours is better wait and finish the one already on and that post the other if not is a mess, tell me about.. i had much to do and non i had finish :p

mmm maybe about the several plot you had for that history, i really cant help you, i dont had read rosario - vampire but i can tell yuo, what you doing is something curios adn ewn and is amazing, is my personal opinion, but i thinkis need to begun thte real romance ( temari si helping sakura chan and that is cool, but like you said somehow i miss her temper and yeah you know need change a little, ok im changin what i think now what i said before i mean, her naive is cute but can be little annoy, beside our sakura is not like that much, but like i said, maybe do that in her transformation, but same time she can be still nice to naruto and shy sometimes, mostly havign girls like Ino or hinata and now temari XD

the gaara part like it much, is nice he had somebody to udnertand him and wiht him while him sister is wiht naruto and the girls :D

what more? maybe lets talk in pm about it, you know that fanfic is my first choice to read and wait to otehr of you history becuase is the first one i think i read from you, later come the other i like that much (good harem too hehe, now naruto and him troop are in a delicate moments with that pirate girl, and the most funny.. is like sakura chan is pregnant hehehe.. oh man her temper will go like wiremadness thing XD
odessaskies chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
Please continue! This story is sooo interesting! I love how you give the harem their own reason for following Naruto instead of the usual "he's cute!"
Guest chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
noooo do not rewrite it i like how this story is going. it has a good flow to it a canon Sakura will not fit this type of story to me giving sakura outer moka's personality makes me want to root for her to get naruto however putting canon sakura is a bigger mistake to protray and if you read Rosario Vampire year 1 was all about building up the personally of each character they didn't start major plot to later on right now you are doing the same thing here, by the way some of the best story take more chapters than other's look I know you wrote canon sakura in your other story's but they work for those storys not for this one if you worry about overstreaching yourself take your time relax take a breathe no rush however a rewrite people who read this more chapters as fast as possible to catch up with the first story and that will lead to stop writng all together well that is my opinion on this matter.
GK the 9Tailed Reaper chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
i like this story's sakura but i also like the idea of a more canon sakura either way is great to me
i love how this story is going so far
longsilver777 chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
please don't scrap this story or any other stories you are working on , your stories are all well written !
Minato 0077 chapter 29 . 6/19/2013
Best comeback ever! Love your stories!
25BAM50 chapter 29 . 6/18/2013
great chapter again and I thought you did a nice job with Sakura character even though its not her canon character like, but that also fall under most characters in your story are not canon like but that's a good thing
NaruSaku24 chapter 28 . 6/17/2013
Awesome story. Can't wait til you update this.
25BAM50 chapter 28 . 6/17/2013
this is one of the best stories I have read on this site !
kidloco chapter 13 . 6/7/2013
ok sorry againg for my tardiness, but wish read more chapters from you and still saying i love you fanfic and oh lol, temari are in the madness world of naruto XD hahahaha

yes im back and like i said before goin to read the whole fanfic again, had be 5 month away and is time me to back to read you fanfics and mostyly that fanfci hehe, i wait Ino teach more to sakura about roamnce and ect, is to much inocent make me giggle and said cute but i think sometimes she need more, wiht that new body of her, yes her sister teach her good but i think Ino can help her somehow, beside now teamri there, everythign will go crazy XD

pd is look i had review in chapter 28 XD
kidloco chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
sorry if i dint review that time and laters, i had read it and like it but i think i was not in mood to review for some reaso, sorry for that, but had be to long and i relyl want read another chapter of that increible fanfic, i think about sakura visit naruto and see what he doing(wiht the emo too) in that, not idea what girls can go there :pi love you history and want see more of you fanfic, mostly that fanfic, going to read again the whole fanfic to remember things and lol others and maybe give you some ideas, who knows
again, i love taht history and wish read more news chapters :D

Prince of the Forgotten chapter 12 . 2/3/2013
Ive already read your story past the Sabaku siblings arc and was just thinking of some more people for the club: for Naruto, I thought of amaru from the second movie and for Sasuke, the girl from that ninja cat shop. I can't think of her name though
zingray chapter 28 . 1/16/2013
Your a fucking genius you have an incredible mind the scenraiors and situations you make and create are on another level I can even see this being made into an anime I lie to you not, its that good! I love this story more then the sengoku naruto story all of your other stories, this one is the best!

I don't want this to story to end I hope you do like 20 more chapters before you do end this story and I hope if possible that naruto can get with all of the females and have children with them willingly or not. after this one is done please make sequel!
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