|Reviews for Castlevania: Dreams of the Heart|
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/21
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
| Taxsylrc chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
Hi there, you know they had made Lords of Shadow 2, right? Check it out, it's a good game!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
The makers of the game say the translation Eu sunt Dracul means 'I am the Dragon' and in the description on the box (or somewhere) that the people started calling him dracula.
| ThE 4SsAsSiN 21 chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
You did a good job on portraying Dracula, everybody knows that he is never the hero and by killing just random bystanders shows the reader that Dracula has a purpose and he will do anything to achieve that purpose. I believe that Dracula, as a elite warrior with skills and experience to prove it (not to mention his newly improved vampire senses), would never ignore his instincts; he would definitely know if someone was watching him, no one can sneak up on Dracula. Good work;)
| MinervaDescent chapter 15 . 12/31/2013
It's not gonna be another year before you update is it? It's already 2014 lol. But seriously before you know it, another year will have passed by, LoS 2 will have been released and there goes your plot. Update...ir no chocolate chip cookies for you.
| Kars chapter 14 . 6/14/2013
I'm SOOOO excited for LOS2. I don't think you can understand how happy I was when the new trailer came out.
My only complaint for this chapter was this: "Let me ask you something; while you ruthlessly track and murder my kind in droves, have you ever stopped to think that we have lives of our own? Families?"
That seems really out of character for Gabriel/Dracula. I honestly believe that he doesn't care a thing about vampires as a whole and only sees them as tools to be used in his revenge. I completely understand him being upset over Alucard, but I think that what little humanity he has in him is strictly reserved just for Alucard. That's it. I mean, in MOF, Dracula had no qualms killing his own grandson. So, I don't buy that he cares about anything other than his revenge. I don't think he can empathize with other vampires; I think he doesn't care about them at all.
But that may just be me.
(Don't kill Alucard! I lurves him! /3)
| MEleeSmasher chapter 14 . 6/7/2013
Well, that is interesting.
| MEleeSmasher chapter 13 . 6/7/2013
I wonder, just how much will it contradict LoS2 when it does come out?
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 13 . 5/24/2013
Did you know I was thinking of that very same thing, Malphas' love story, just days ago? :o I can buy the idea that Zobeck was her love - it makes sense, even. And how you wove the bird foeti into it and- ah, it's gorgeous! But more than that, I'm impressed by how beautifully you weave that little detour and expansion of the lore into Aria's life. Fits like a glove, and enhances the strength of the story.
No, it's not too late to add Trevor in: you're right, it wouldn't do to leave out such an important person in his life. I'm still in love with your fic, and I hope you will keep expanding on the original game concept and make this as rich as it is.
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 12 . 5/24/2013
Oh my, I've been gone this long? Well, busy times...
That's a nice dungeon again: I do like that you keep it in the vein of a game just a little bit. :) And really, "he might make a good father"? Arianna, Arianna; when such thoughts begin to crop up in mind... xP I just love how you turned the tables here, with him saving her out of instinct and SHE becoming the one who teases HIM! No essays on gender-equality, but it's such a treat to see a woman get back at him the way she does. :3
I wanna play LoS2... *w* It's gonna be awesome... I think the self-refilling energy bar sounds off-putting, but I'll probably love the game still... *drifts off in longing*
| viviana.neni chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
when you post the next chapter, I love the story... 3
| viviana.neni chapter 11 . 4/1/2013
I love the story
| Kars chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I'm not very good at reviewing, but I really enjoyed this first chapter.
I just think that the introduction of the stranger at the end was really random and out-of-place and that Dracula completely ignoring it was odd. But other than that, no complaints. :)
I enjoyed your writing style. It flowed well and your descriptions weren't over the top.
Eh, I don't know how to give advice when it comes to writing, so bare with me when I review.
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Some people have lives, I have writing... I try to keep a certain interval between nagging and time of latest update, well aware that most don't spend every waking moment (and sometimes sleeping) deciding how to best bring out the feeling of a story. Forgive me if I'm being very impertinent and impatient, but I think enough time has passed to justify some puppy-eyes and a plea for updates. You are aware that I was on the edge of my chair after your last chapter, right...?
| LateNiteSlacker chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I've only read the first chapter so far, but I wanted to let you know that your writing style is very nice! I love your attention to detail, especially the descriptions of Gabriel's surroundings. The characters are believable, and your plot seems good so far. This story is off to a nice start, and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it from here.