Reviews for My Beauty
fanfictionalcolic chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
I love this story I hope one day inspiration will be back ad you will finish my Viking and maybe give us more of my beauty...
SILVERLINING67 chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
I've downloaded the pdf of 'My Viking' and I am loving it. I've read about it from other readers and authors and was disappointed when I saw that it had been removed. Thanks.
abaith chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
I love the viking story.
cbzoo chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
so good bring back my viking
cbzoo chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I so loved My Viking and was very disappointed when you abandoned it. You have done that on a few so I won't read anything not finished which is a shame because you write really well
My Viking chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I love all your stories and still read them all the time but my Viking was my fav! Where has it gone? :( Please put it back on :)

HawraaN chapter 2 . 9/4/2013
I hope you post more. Love your story.
HawraaN chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
So kind and sweet. Love this story
jessica.simone.thomas chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
Please please pleeeeasssseeeee continue this story I am dying in wait for you to continue My Viking. I love both stories so much!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
ohhh, I see what you did there. Bella means beautiful. My BellaMy beautiful (or beauty)
garrigan-nass chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
Awww...that was so sweet. I decided to check out "My Beauty" as I just read the most recent chapter of "My Viking." You did such a great job with Edvard's POV. It's been awhile since I've read those first few chapters but I do remember the overwhelming fear, confusion and sense of loss that Bela felt when she landed on foreign shores and was presented to the Chief. Edvard,of course, had an entirely different experience upon meeting Bella.

I had almost forgotten how committed he was to bringing her pleasure b/f his own. Bella was incredibly frightened and probably thought she'd lose her life if she rejected him (or fought too hard) but Edvard was patient and kind. (I guess as much as a horny Viking Chief who ALWAYS gets what he want can be with a terrified foreign girl in his bed chamber.)

Anyway, great job. You've been writing this story for quite awhile now. Thanks for not giving up on it. Judging by your impressive review numbers, your readers are pretty devoted.
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 7/14/2013
I do hope you expand this one day with more of his viewpoint. As for now, this is a wonderful glimpse of our beautiful and manly Edvard!
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
It's lovely reading this from his viewpoint. He is unapologetic for his ways as they are all he knows, yet he is so different from her. I think I like his ways better!
Twihardtothecore chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
Ooohhh yes you should totally add to this story. Especially around the time that Bella was no longer but but merely a thrall. And how this he longed for her.
SJMason chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
I'm from norway, and just thought you should know that in noraway, sweden and denmark cunt and cock is spelled "fitte" and "kukk."
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