|Reviews for Human Error|
| Sacrom chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
It's a nice story, makes you think... but it needs some work on the grammar and punctuation.
| Focusphobia chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
It makes me sad that it's always the good stories that die young.
| TyroAkira chapter 2 . 5/13/2012
haha! "nice boxers by the way" made me laugh so hard! i love this, i hope there is more coming!
| LadyElemental chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
I thought this was really great, especially the first chapter. Great job on capturing the essence of both Master Chief and House. Too bad there isn't more, I would really like to read more about John and House meeting up.
| CMVreud chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
forgot to mention the amount of boring boredom and the many uses (and fetishes) for a V.I. with constant internet access (hint ant cortana/jhon romance)
besides i totally see house going with him and a lot of vico to relieve him of that boredoom
| CMVreud chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
just expected House to be a little more
-whiney, becauase of his job, his leg, tho whole damn war
-a litte more out to get under Johns skin, or Cortanas, a little more hurtful, more House-ish
and what's with all the other hospital staff? run away? killed?
| undeaddade chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
HEY! I thought you were a House fan.
| Tawariell chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Yeah. From the 3rd season finale. Anyway, it's certainly a new idea.
But I felt like the interraction between them was a little forced, especially after John woke up. Also, your writing needs some work. Try to include some body language or facial cues. And some descriptions. Not everything needs to be action and dialogue.
| BillIsDead117 chapter 2 . 5/17/2011
great crossover I couuld have never thought that one up!