Reviews for Young Justice: Arashikage
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25
I just love how almost fucking everyone said naruto is a ninja and yet he doesn't shut the fuck up and is shit at being quiet, the only reason he remotely classified as a ninja is he has chakra, that's it
dragn red-x chapter 9 . 9/16
deberían alguien continuar la historia por que esta chida ojala y actualicen pronto suerte
Ricardo286 chapter 9 . 8/20
oye estaba leyendo barios fincs y me tope con este y lo acabo de leer todo y me gusto mucho sabes deberías continuarlo por que esta genial y real mente espero la continuación espero que consideres volver a continuar esta historia suerte espero que la continúes
Alfedro203 chapter 1 . 8/20
ademas alguien debería continuarla porque la historia esta genial y entretenida
ACE-X7 chapter 9 . 8/10
ademas alguien debería continuarla porque la historia esta genial y entretenida
bigfan22 chapter 9 . 7/27
Damn shame this fic was abandoned. It was not only well written, but I love the Grey Naruto you have created. Even his relationship with Rose and Jade made for an entertaining read, and I wouldn't have mind seeing Lady Shiva join the group later on. Hopefully one day time and your muse will allow you to come back and continue this excellent story. Till then...thanks for giving us what you have already written and great job!
Alfedro203 chapter 9 . 7/19
estuvo genial el capitulo deberías continuar la historia ojala y no la aijas olvidado espero la continuación suerte
Jonny Walker chapter 6 . 6/17
disappointing. an insult if it was for didn't even present quarter of what batman is capable he doesn't have Superman's strength but he's as capable and dangerous when fighting IN the DARKNESS for gods a bull***if think batman has a disadvantage in the dark
Guest chapter 9 . 6/12
No kyuubi/sage mode against superman whatsoever? I think it would have meant for an epic battle with naruto winning because of a hesitant superman unable to kill. With naruto his own arsenal of techniques and the combination of the bijuu should have made him quite powerful. By powerful I mean he would have gained the rinne sharingan. Reason? It so happens when the ten tails is sealed within said person. Along with larger chakra reserves constantly growing. Why? Because kyuubi's chakra was slowly expanding his already massive reserves because he was an Uzumaki and with the juubi it makes for an unfair advantage for both sides of the coin. One he would need more chakra control training and with the hiraishin, sealing techniques, and chakra chains ( reasons to why is because chakra is a life source and in that world people would have chakra as well because it's usually said everyday that chakra does exist. But can't be used in anyway in this world besides inner peace. ) that would drain his entire life force, and the combined bijuu making him slightely and only slightely more powerful than superman with the rinne sharingan and the byakugan. The byakugan because it can be only unlocked by those with the people in the Hyuuga clan or being the hot to the juubi, and his final form against superman would be similar to the fight between bijuu with naruto instead of taking the kyuubi's form he would take the juubi's. Why? Because the consciousness of all the bijuu were combined, and the fact naruto befriended all bijuu, and the juubi did not want humans using his chakra, with naruto being the only one the primordial being would be content with that fact only one person would use chakra. And chakra always grows more potent later on, on its own of coarse. Add naruto's skill level he should be from when you transported him at that time in the series more experienced than anyone in the do universe. Why? Because naruto has training in nearly all forms of combat, stealth, and tactics. Naruto was taught tactics by jiraiya at one point. But it was discreetly showing him why tactics are so important. By doing so naruto re,over his pranking streak and making it into a boon for himself. So all in all with the added abilities you brought with him is quite extensive and too overpowered. I suggest you have him only slightely more powerful than superman without the weakness of coarse because there is none when no one knows sealing in that world. But he would still be defeated at some point. Well cya.
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