Reviews for Progress
aCEMANIa chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
If you are serious about the killer sharks, I would like to have one. Also, how could this fic jump the shark when it's so bombastic and over the top in the first place? There's no pleasing some people.
AbyssShade chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
I wanna have Sexy Breakfast Time with Sundance! XD
Ragnarok Warrior chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
How would you even be able to jump the shark in this kind of story? It's MLP for crying out loud and a humor fic to boot.

I was actually dreading which poor shmuck would be the sidekick. I really should have seen that coming.
Bromine chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
Luv the fact you basically said;

"You say Im jumping the shark, i kill you. Merry Christmas!"
Lavasharks chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
Those references :D

Also, hooray for live sharks.

-Sharky
deviatorytoss chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
"She'd married her and Hoyden..." Wait, what?

Never knew they were into polygamy. :P
Danvighar chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
*snicker*

I love the clashing tropes.

Hmm.. Batman, Superman, etc...

Roll them all together, Luna-style, and you get... The Tick!

Also a cute little one-liner of Rorschach. Well done.

Typo: "wrapped around the hoof like one of the Princess's grieves." - Should be 'greaves'

(... and I just had to add that to Firefox's dictionary, despite it being a perfectly common term in classical fantasy. What is -wrong- with the world?)

Love that The Don is actually sympathetic... implication there that there has been more than one would-be Hero having their "first night in Canterlot".
wildrook chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
You've got to be kidding me...
experimentalDeity chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
I'm ... starting to think Luna has gone a bit... off the deep end.
MasterRaptor77 chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
*facehoof*

LUNA.

YOU'RE DOING IT WRONG.

Mkay, this sets a new record for Hilarious Luna.

You may have heard this from me before, but if it was possible to double-favorite, I would have done so, a thousand times over.
guest chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
dude...just wow...

you even made luna seem crazier by talking to herself and telling herself she ISNT crazy...
Des Shinta chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
People call this Jumping the shark? Dude, I remember the original Draft of Nerv's Belfry. THAT was jumping the Shark-Who sends a guide on how to be batman to the second wimpiest Japanese protagonist through an interdimensional stargate based on Toltiir's from the Bet?

This? This is a result of Drinking the Kool-Aid while playing Arkham City and Watching Reruns of Atop the Fourth Wall at the same time as you are coming up with new plots for stories. I actually find it quite funny.
not my real name213 chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
holy celestia, that was amazing.
Nattam chapter 27 . 12/19/2011
Quite funny. Hoyden encouraging Luna being a silly pony feels so right.

In the defense of Luna, physical deities like her are frighteningly common in actual superhero stories, of course. Too bad for her she doesn't live in a fiction which runs according to superhero rules...
Friendly Uncle chapter 26 . 12/19/2011
What the- GET BACK HERE TALON, YOU PROMISED ME GIANT ROBOTS!

...that being said, Luna in the Mare Do Well costume makes me giggle. Throw in a microwave-themed villain and I think I an cope.
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