Reviews for Progress
Alex Warlorn chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
Is that you Mother…? Tell Celestia to stop taking my toys…

Made me smile.

POOR LUNA! Seems bad luck is seeking her out today, not just her 'I don't need help' attitude.

I was half expecting hot dogs at a baseball game until I remembered they're all naturally vegans.

I wonder how Pegasi would react to an aircraft and could see them as a threat to their business. Heh.
Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
So much double meaning in those last two sentences.
Sir Politic Am-Be chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
These are some cute stories. The pacing is good, the premise is fun, and I like the way you portray the characters. You almost make me want to go to a baseball game, although I don't think they play them now much like they did back when throwing a ball behind a man's shoulder was something you could get away with.

It's an interesting read, and I'm going to guess you've got more stuff planned. I'd kind of like to find out what happened to Luna's abacus. It's a historical hierloom, after all.
Zephyrus Anemoi Fiction chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Genius Talon.

Ya know what you should do next:

Luna Vs. POKER!
Dark Side of the World chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Simple. Cute. Funny. Awesome. More.

Des Shinta chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Oh dear, they got you too, huh AJ?

Well, it is a rather interesting series, I'll have to promote this.
Stan Wilson chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Yes, clearly you are, but it is a good insanity.
Niche Eenhoorn chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Awww, this was a really sweet story. I loved how her (mis)calculations ended up in 27 minutes. My popcorn already looks like charcoal if I leave it for more than 3.30 :D

Thanks for sharing!
Greki chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Awwww, this was soooo cute! XDDD

Thanks a lot for writing it!
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