Reviews for The Man Who Would Be King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I... kinda don't know what I just read. I mean, I do. But I don't. Peter Wiggin in Narnia is just so weird to me. But I do think you've kept him in character (I question the severity of his shock over the Witch's followers' post-battle behaviour, but I suppose even he may draw a line somewhere). Also surprised that he didn't seem all that bothered by Jadis finding out his last name. I do like how his analytical side comes out all over the place, from judging Jadis' fake smile to working with his subordinates' ways of life and nature. Ariel_of_Narnia |
![]() ![]() Holy crap! This is brilliant! Of course Peter would love the chance to play war. |
![]() ![]() I was hoping Peter would be the White Witch's enemy, but this is good too. Unfortunately this looks like it has been discontinued... oh well... |
![]() ![]() Hell yes... Peter is the kind of enemy the White Witch deserves... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. I'm guessing Christian morality isn't going to be a message in this Narnia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this was fun. Is Ender somehow going to end up in charge of Aslan's forces, against Peter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I never thought of the fantasy game as a bridge to Narnia! Given what we know of Jane in the Ender sequels, this is brilliant! Also, summing up the whole fantasy game (for a while) with the question "ARE you a killer?" - that was a very astute observation. Last chapter was an interesting concept. With this one, I'm hooked! I know you haven't published much fanfiction for a while, but I'm still glad you shared this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a lot of fun. I like how you handled Peter. Val's barb about the squirrels was excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. So he won't be on the queen's side, nor on Aslan's? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just re-read this. Such a fun idea. Also reminds me a little bit of Saphroneth's Saruman of Many Devices, except with the added fun of Peter. |
![]() ![]() This concept is fantastic! (Literally, fantastical...) If Peter, Val, and Ender were transported to Narnia, their world would end. The whole idea of Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy was that they were still children with the minds of adults (later, of course, AFTER they had been to Narnia and back), so this comparison is surprisingly similar. Of course, Card's Peter is far more warlike than Lewis' Peter, and it would be interesting to see how his character played out his role. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done, very well done. I love how Peter can get under Jadis' skin so easily. It makes Peter more dangerous. Please have Valentine join Aslan. Maybe add Achilles. |
![]() ![]() Aooouuuuuuuuu. So cooool. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() I'm so glad I followed this! Thanks for updating I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes! |