Reviews for Just Pick Me
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
you are an amazing writer, and I love this story just as much as your writing skills!

please update another chapter soon!

this is one of my favourite stories that you have written so far, and youre only on the 14th chapter!


NIko'13 chapter 14 . 8/12/2011
AWSOME i LOVED IT like always ooooo i almost forgot check ur youtube page PLAESE 4 ME!
Twisted-Twilighter chapter 14 . 8/11/2011
Who the fuck cares if she loses Alice? Alice is a bitch. I can't believe she said all that to Bella. Did she seriously think Bella is jealous of her and tries to take everything away from her? She is clearly delusional. Maybe she's a little insane! If she were my friend I'd have cut her out of my life long back. I don't want someone like her even as just an acquaintance forget being best friends with her. Believe me Bella, you're way off better without her!
Twisted-Twilighter chapter 12 . 7/26/2011
Awww...sweet chapter! No Alice, so I really, really liked it! Hehe!
SiempreCrystalClear chapter 12 . 7/26/2011
Very cute chapter :) I loved it! You are amazing. Please write more soon... otherwise... I'll... (?) idk what I'll do... haha
Twisted-Twilighter chapter 11 . 7/13/2011
Gah, how in the world did Bella remained friends with Alice all these years? She's so selfish and oh so annoying. I bet she's inwardly jealous of Bella and probably even hates her a bit. I also bet she's only pretending to dislike Jasper, she wishes he were her's! Bitch!
Smileyface Devil chapter 11 . 7/13/2011
i loved it but i think that bella needs to like slap alice or something like that sometime soon. because bella really does need to stand up for herself and yell at alice for once.

it was great

SF Devil
SiempreCrystalClear chapter 11 . 7/12/2011
great chapter chica :) As i have already told you. I love this story so much, and as always, I can't wait to read more... so get to writing that damn thing! :D
Charley chapter 10 . 6/4/2011
wooooow! I've subbed to you, as a writer, and when this first came up I thought "great, another story" (sarcastically) but then when I saw you'd posted 10 chapters I actually got quite excited and have read them continuously! Now we get to chapter ten and I'm quite dissapointed. Please finish off this story :D It's really really good.
Twisted-Twilighter chapter 10 . 6/4/2011
I bet Alice only wants Jasper for herself and she's hating him because he doesn't want her back. Bitch!
sweetmel21 chapter 10 . 6/4/2011
I love this little story.
SiempreCrystalClear chapter 10 . 6/3/2011
Wow.. I'm SO surprised you posted... I can't say I was expecting that at all ;) Okay... maybe I was :D I loved this chapter as I told you, and I can't wait to read more from you. Oh and also, have a good time in Europe, don't party too hard without me ;) i'm jk. lol
SiempreCrystalClear chapter 9 . 6/2/2011
I read your A/N at the bottom and laughed when you said "so sorry if you've read it like ten times already" and I was like THAT IS SO ME! Haha anyways, now I understand your story better with this chapter :D you have done a wonderful job with this, and as always, I am excited for more. Annoyed about all my reviews in a 20 minute span yet? ;P
Vampir3.S3duction chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
Alice really is a two-timer. I mean, you just don't do that to your best friend. That's the lowest of low you can get in my views anyway. But I am SO happy for Bella and Jasper :). I can see Alice and Edward not being happy though and Bella needs to tell Alice off for the bad things she says towards Jasper. It isn't right just because she's spoiled and he's the first person to tell her no. That's kinda funny, lol.
Vampir3.S3duction chapter 8 . 5/30/2011
YAY! I am SO happy because Jasper is the absolute best, lol. And Alice is a slave driver. Bella is supposed to be her friend but she treats her like a maid or something and Bella LETS her. Alice acts like she's a child who can't do anything for herself. Good chap :)
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