Reviews for Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans Potter
becgate chapter 23 . 9/13/2017
Love love love it! Well done !
Amalthia chapter 20 . 9/3/2017
I had a great time reading your story! I loved the character voices, the pacing, and seeing how Snape and Harry adjusted to each other and Snape discovering he was wrong about Harry's upbringing.
moodysavage chapter 23 . 8/20/2017
This story is really fun to read. And I like the bantering via the necklace. That was a very nice touch.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2017
THIS feels like the Severitus I've always wanted to read and never found. Thank you!
Aura Sharzeel chapter 23 . 8/10/2017
This is the best Snape fic I've ever read! I read 'Lily's Last Wish' first and couldn't resist to read its prequel. And it was amazing! The best description of Snape and his charactersistics along with how you placed Harry and Snape's situations and the similarities in them,the way it melt with the circumstances of the HP books,it's just perfect. Looking forward to the end of 'Lily's Last Wish'.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Lol! Great first chapter! Reading this a second time and still love it. Highly amusing!
Love2read23 chapter 22 . 8/6/2017
This has been a very well done fic. Thank you for writing.
Owl Post Office chapter 23 . 8/6/2017
I liked the general tone of this story. Read it on one day. However, I would also advise you to introduce the year/Harry's age early on in the story. It is a little confusing at parts, not really knowing how far in the books this story is set. Apart from this: great work!
Chrissysmiles chapter 22 . 7/29/2017
Enjoyed this story!
However, the first year of Harry's life was with his parents, I am hoping they didn't abuse a baby. Maybe just didn't show Harry any my point is, the spell Severus placed on them wouldn't be 16 years it would be less than 14 years.

However, still will be interesting to see if Harry learns to trust Severus, what does that mean for Albus.
Glad you wrote a sequel!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
sooooo excited your back Hip Hip Hooray Looking forward to living with in your story
Pepperonyfan1982 chapter 23 . 7/23/2017
yarnfan4life chapter 23 . 7/21/2017
love it please write more
Fallow54 chapter 23 . 7/21/2017
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
Shetan20 chapter 10 . 7/21/2017
Thank you for a very enjoyable story.
john1057 chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
Honestly this feels all over the place. In the first chapter, I think it's post first year maybe, by the 2nd with the firebolt mention I think post 3rd. Finally I get to this chapter and we find out it's post 5th? The tone is all over the place. Harry come across as a child not a teenager. Can't say I'm going to stick this one through.
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