You're doing a good job of bringing some revelations, albeit as agonizingly slowly as possible.

Giving Snape even the slightest twinge that he gave a shite - ie, that he's not canon snivellus - before chapter 4 would have reduced my earlier disgust at my number one most hated person in canon.

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"And what reason would they have to treat you like this?"
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OK, so we're going with Snape is incompetent at Legillimancy and never saw a single moment of Harry's first 10 years at durzkaban, nor the previous three summers. meh

I know that Snape is supposed to be intelligent, but how can he honestly reconcile everything he has seen - including via his mind-rapes - and the evidence of Harry's appearance, and still hold to his psychotic predetermination of what Harry's life was supposedly like and who Harry is?
I get that you are going for some kind of mentor relationship, but if you are starting with canon Snape, I just cannot see how he will change when he has maintained a willful ignorance bordering on mental illness, discarding reality and loathing Harry with every fiber of his being?

Well, that's a bit mind-blowing!

I assume this is a bit AU, for instance, snivellus knows exactly what Harry's life was like at the dursleys. His hatred of the boy isn't going to go away for any reason as he knows that Harry's life was as bad as his own childhood, not the pampered prince bullshite snivellus spouts.

That said, it's Lily's Will, so maybe snivellus will be transformed into a human being through some ancient ritual when he reads it? :D

I thought this was great. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading your other works

The order sure kept Harry safe at his relatives

Uh, Professor? Is that your 'wand' poking me during the apparition? And Professor? Could you let go now, and stop humping me!

Very enjoyable and well written. Nice job.

ahhh, they are so adorable

Well written, in character, is this a miracle? I think so! Thanks for writing this, I am enjoying it thoroughly!

Harry and Snape would be a formidable team.

A good start for the story.

I LOVE THISSSS

Awesome read

I can’t go into Chapter 5 because there’s an error saying it doesn’t exist. Help?

This is so great! I wasnt expecting such good writing since the beginning with petunia and Vernon seemed simplistic and rush but harry and Snape's interaction blew me away and I love, love, love it! Thank you!