Reviews for Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a surprising ending to the chapter! Snape seemed very sympathetic to Potter, but then . . . However, it was very believable that he could let his usual irritation with Potter overcome his sympathetic feelings and say something that. I'm assuming it will deeply hurt Harry and put a real crimp in their developing understanding. Very interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how this story is progressing - they're learning more about each other, and at a reasonable pace too. Looking forward to your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor snape! can't wait for the next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is really good so far. I love reading a story that has Snape being a gaurdian of Harry. I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it you rule. thanks for writing. hugs and kisses krynny |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story. It's refreshing to see a different take on the classic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the chapter can you please try to get a new chapter up tonight |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very much enjoying this story. Keep up the good work! -Adrienne |
![]() ![]() ![]() great new chapter. I'm glad that Severus talked to Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really liking this adult, mature Snape. Being able to recognize his mistakes puts him on the right track. Hopefully, Harry will learn how to trust him. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whew! I'm glad that's cleared up. Now we might be able to make some plot-related progress. And Voldemort soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well handled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like how you did this chapter. Harry wasn't overly disrespectful (which gets annoying when overly done) and Severus actually took time to explain *some* things to Harry. I hate it when i have to read a really direspectful Harry. There's a fine line between stating your opinion and how you feel, and being completely disrespectful. i also hate it when people write Snape to be so blind with hatred that he overlooks everything obvious, even his own instincts. And while i believe to an extent that it's possible, i don't believe that he would ignore harry's abuse if practically thrown in his face. You did a great job balancing this. i can't waith for your next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |