Reviews for Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans Potter
MissGallagherGirl chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Great story, please update soon! :)
L chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
please write more!
tttuuu chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Wonderful story. Really like it!
GinaStar chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
zentry chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
oh, more please, this chapter was too short :)
littlesun chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Mmm, nice. A nice beginning at least. The plot goes slowly (which I quite like) - I will be curious where you will lead it. Mila
Murasaki Tsuki chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Wow i cant believe how great a sory this is turning out to be! I LOVE it! Wonder when Snape is going to find out about Harrys less than perfect life... cant wait! Update soon!
misundersnape chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Poor Harry. Not quite able to get across that he's honestly not 'spoiled'. But Snape wouldn't listen anyway, in the mood he's in - that he's always in with Harry - or even wouldn't believe a word Harry said.

"Herein lies the last will and testament of Lilian "Lily" Anne Potter (nee Evans)."

Lilian? Isn't 'Lilian' a dirivitive of 'Lily-Anne', so therefore you have 'Lily-Anne Anne Potter'? Just saying... I'm assuming none of this is canon, as I've never heard it before, but if I am wrong, well, please continue... ;)

Looking forward to knowing why Lily would choose Snape, even at the end of that list of potential guadians. And especially how and why James would agree too...

Fantastic imagery and characterisation... I want more!


misundersnape chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
Lovely imagery!

And Harry snuck a look at the envelope and letter whilst Snape's back was turned - good, good... now Severus cannot 'foister' him onto someone else... ;) Well, not without at least answering a few sticky, loaded questions, anyway! lol

Oh, I actually read the first chap earlier today, but then was distracted by my 11 y/old girl's sleepover so I forgot to say, but I highly doubt a 'portable dvd player' was available back in those days. Perhaps to the ultra rich, but not widely available to working class families. They're a more recent technological toy. I like how Dudley is distracted by it, but I hope you might be able to find another, more era appropriate toy instead. Perhaps a Nintendo Game Boy? I think that was when they were first out.

Anyway - that's certainly my only gripe about this fic - in all other aspects it is sensational!

misundersnape chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Such a brilliant and orginal start to a Harry/Snape fic. Fantastic. I love the emotion and thoughts driving their way through Harry's mind. He's been 'foistered' on Snape, the man that surely hates him and makes his life at Hogwarts difficult. Lovely!

Can't wait to read more... I'm off...

Wylie chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Well written chapter. :)

Nothing more to say.
Very Small Prophet chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Harry is a horrible brat, isn't he? Ah, adolescence! Well, eventually most whiney, self-centered kids become human, though you couldn't tell by Harry at this point in his career. I'm sure Severus longs to lock him in his bedroom with a Silencing Charm, and I wouldn't blame him for a minute.

By the way, "Lily" is not short for "Lilian." It is a name in its own right.
pokemon-hogwarts4eva chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
cant wait for the next when snape sees harry in his bestest rags
icansoar chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
Very interesting! Looking forward to your next update.
attyfan chapter 3 . 5/13/2011
This story looks most promising.
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