Reviews for The Immortal's Daughter
ScarletRavenwood chapter 17 . 6/8/2013
love the story...but kinda annoyed about how Raven is always a panther now...can she go back to being human?
Loopyloola chapter 31 . 11/27/2012
I started reading...last week ,I think, and I only just remembered to review! So here it is, I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Raven is awesome! I like the sibling relationship she has with Rephaim as well. I will go and read Immortal's Key now.
omf123 chapter 10 . 11/9/2012
this chapter was so good it gave me goosebumps :-)
Bobbie chapter 31 . 7/21/2012
this is such a good book i couldnt stop reading it!
baby Cyclopes chapter 31 . 7/10/2012
smileysammy chapter 21 . 6/19/2012
this is great so far i apsoultely love it
smileysammy chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
i love this!
xX Angel Of Mine Xx chapter 31 . 3/3/2012
This is AWESOME. I love it, I love this I love Raven I love Dominic I love the story and the protrayl of characters, I love how you've added Raven into the original books I love the way she develops through this I love how I wanted to keep on reading after each chapter I love the way you've given detail on parts that the original books didn't. It's amazing and love it.:)
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 31 . 2/28/2012
Great story! Is it now complete?

Tarah xXx
Xxdreamergirl95xX chapter 29 . 2/23/2012
I love this story!

This is the best one I've ever read,and believe me i read quite a lot.

Everything about this story is amazing...the characters,the plot,everything!

So please do not stop!

I am looking forward to the next chapters.

You are doing a great job!

Keep it up!
penname101 chapter 29 . 2/22/2012
Omg... I'm soo jelly... You're an amazing writer. Anyyway, this chapter is amazing. No wait I take that back.. The whole thing is. Granted, you have room to grow but the way you have Raven figured out makes it a lot easier to relate to her and I love being able to relate to my characters. Now, there is some issues like grammar but I'm guessing you don't go through and edit it. It's really good and I can't wait to read more!
LoopyLizzie chapter 29 . 2/22/2012
Great chapter, as usual! :) xx
READandWRITE11 chapter 29 . 2/22/2012
I'm paying Ur ransom! I love this so much!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 29 . 2/21/2012
great chapter! I would write more, but I'm supposed to be asleep right now...

Tarah xXx
inquiete chapter 29 . 2/21/2012
NO! DON'T HOLD IT FOR RANSOM! I'm reviewing see? I loved the Fae part, it was really beautiful and respectful. This chapter was amazing, better then what I thought it would be. The only problem I had was when Raven said she was born with her power so she didn't have to pay nothing. That's bullshit, even with being born with power in your blood it still comes with a price. Ancient power isn't free, there is still the law of equivalent exchange. If you have asked for something, (Sommoning Light to stop Darkness from knocking out a Earth barrier), you must be able to give something of equal value in return, (usually a certain amount of stamina). I'm sorry if I'm coming off as a know-it-all bitch I'm not trying to be. I'm just pointing something out. Sorry if I offended you but I just felt the need to point that out. Oh and I'm not saying this as a obssessed HoN fan either, I'm saying this as a Pagan.
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