|Reviews for Magic|
| Michi Leona chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Ooooh not bad- love the idea, definitely something that I wished had happened in the actual series. I quite like the structure, the way you built it up to the candle lighting up and then Merlin making it die out. And ending the fic at the word 'magic' was great! You did a great job at building a tense atmosphere.
Some criticism: It took me a while to figure out what exactly was happening, so I enjoyed it much more on my second read. I thought that the candle was already lit from the beginning, so I got confused halfway through. There are some grammar/spelling mistakes, but I won't go nitpicking those unless you want me too. All in all, nice drabble!
| Starts with a D chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Very good! Descriptive, though almost . . . terse? I like it.