|Reviews for The Champion of Kirkwall and the Untamed Mage|
| WindBear47 chapter 4 . 3/21
So much mischief! Love the humor and writing style!
| WindBear47 chapter 3 . 3/21
Nothing says FUN like a bar fight!
| WindBear47 chapter 2 . 3/21
A CLEAN bar! Butterbeer! AWESOME!
| WindBear47 chapter 1 . 3/21
Harry helping the champion instead of being the champion.
Good story twist.
| Byakugan789 chapter 4 . 1/17
Pity you had so little steam for this story.
And as for places to send the mages, Feralden isn't bad, but Rivain would be idea. Until Hawke kicked off the mage rebellion they had mages out among the general populace holding all sorts of jobs and having civilian families. The trade off was that the circle would actively help the templars hunt blood mages.
| Byakugan789 chapter 2 . 1/17
So, Harry going to get 15 percent? or merely come along for the ride?
Be funny if Anders comes to the conclusion that Harry's the 'maker'. That's be HILARIOUS.
| Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 1/17
Well, it depends; are you going to require Harry do the whole dance routine to launch a string of small spells? Or use the staves as simply a pair of foci? Harry wielding a staff in each hand wouldn't be a problem if he could just point and shoot.
Also, I guess by your chapter and AN you're sticking Harry with thedas Magic rather than letting him keep the more general hp spells? There was pulsus and AK, but the party would have been well served by a bit of transfiguration.
For instance, turn Wesley into a locket for avaline to wear while they look for the grey wardens.
Or turn darkspawn corpses into mabari and ste them on the horde in an ever growing tide of dogs.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/1
love it hope more is to come
| Eadane chapter 4 . 12/12/2015
This is an amazing and funny story, hope for more.
| Tony McNucklz chapter 4 . 11/20/2015
MORE DAMN YOU MORE!
| Dovahkiin1503 chapter 3 . 8/21/2015
Good story so far, but please now that they are together as a couple, a bit more Harry/Bethany moments would be nice. and please update soon. Though this was suposed to be a revieuw for chapter 4, but allas I already did one for that chapter
| Cerberusz chapter 4 . 8/7/2015
Ohh please keep working this fic please
| Kingdom Hearts Slayer chapter 4 . 7/25/2015
nice keep going it good
| ManyGamePlayer chapter 4 . 7/23/2015
Very interesting! I absolutely loved it! Please update soon! ;)
| Alex2909 chapter 4 . 6/8/2015
harry is awesome in this story. wonder what his background is