Reviews for The Champion of Kirkwall and the Untamed Mage
BluAsh54 chapter 4 . 9/28
overlord of hell 2012 chapter 4 . 8/3
Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2016
Good old Monty Python. That shit is timeless and, apparently, surpasses dimensional boundaries.

Also, HELL YES Bethany romance! Shame you haven't updated, but it was funny.
Ronin Kenshin chapter 3 . 9/14/2016
good stuff
Ronin Kenshin chapter 2 . 9/14/2016
another good chapter shame its not been updated
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
very good start to a fic looks like it will never be completed but I really like this its great work
doubledamn chapter 4 . 8/26/2016
Can never go wrong with Monty Python. It is now a pan-dimensional comedy.
Dragonman109 chapter 4 . 8/20/2016
Update when you can please.
WindBear47 chapter 4 . 3/21/2016
So much mischief! Love the humor and writing style!
WindBear47 chapter 3 . 3/21/2016
Nothing says FUN like a bar fight!
WindBear47 chapter 2 . 3/21/2016
A CLEAN bar! Butterbeer! AWESOME!
WindBear47 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Harry helping the champion instead of being the champion.
Good story twist.
Byakugan789 chapter 4 . 1/17/2016
Pity you had so little steam for this story.

And as for places to send the mages, Feralden isn't bad, but Rivain would be idea. Until Hawke kicked off the mage rebellion they had mages out among the general populace holding all sorts of jobs and having civilian families. The trade off was that the circle would actively help the templars hunt blood mages.
Byakugan789 chapter 2 . 1/17/2016
So, Harry going to get 15 percent? or merely come along for the ride?

Be funny if Anders comes to the conclusion that Harry's the 'maker'. That's be HILARIOUS.
Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
Well, it depends; are you going to require Harry do the whole dance routine to launch a string of small spells? Or use the staves as simply a pair of foci? Harry wielding a staff in each hand wouldn't be a problem if he could just point and shoot.

Also, I guess by your chapter and AN you're sticking Harry with thedas Magic rather than letting him keep the more general hp spells? There was pulsus and AK, but the party would have been well served by a bit of transfiguration.
For instance, turn Wesley into a locket for avaline to wear while they look for the grey wardens.
Or turn darkspawn corpses into mabari and ste them on the horde in an ever growing tide of dogs.
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