|Reviews for The Champion of Kirkwall and the Untamed Mage|
| Dovahkiin1503 chapter 3 . 8/21
Good story so far, but please now that they are together as a couple, a bit more Harry/Bethany moments would be nice. and please update soon. Though this was suposed to be a revieuw for chapter 4, but allas I already did one for that chapter
| Cerberusz chapter 4 . 8/7
Ohh please keep working this fic please
| Kingdom Hearts Slayer chapter 4 . 7/25
nice keep going it good
| ManyGamePlayer chapter 4 . 7/23
Very interesting! I absolutely loved it! Please update soon! ;)
| Alex2909 chapter 4 . 6/8
harry is awesome in this story. wonder what his background is
| orion0905 chapter 4 . 5/2
Pity, this story is a lot of fun, I will have to hope you return to this at some point. Sadly I doubt it.
| tamagat chapter 4 . 3/20
holy hell! this funny as fuck!
| desdelor97 chapter 4 . 3/19
This Was A Great Chapter. Please Keep Up The Great Work.
| Warden of Lore chapter 4 . 1/13
Please put this up for adoption It needs to be finished.
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 1/13
You know, now that I've played Inquisition, I find myself wondering just what was in that Amulet, a piece of the original Flemeth? A fragment of Mythal? Or a mixture of both?
Oh! And I have a new take on the AK Curse, it is in fact a Forced Dreaming. The spell forces the spirit into the Fade, but because of the violent nature of the spirit removal the shock to the body kills it. Similar to a Dementor's Kiss, but much faster.
| Tassadar112 chapter 4 . 1/9
Amazing but needs updated
| jay123 chapter 4 . 11/24/2014
ya should keep this going its really cool good work
| Dur'id the Druid chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
Good quirky story. Shame it hasn't updated for so long.
| Pax chapter 4 . 10/3/2014
Why didn't u ever finish this its so funny
| patiflops2 chapter 4 . 8/15/2014
Nice story my friend, brilliant writting and story line keep up the fantastic work. Fav and follow