|Reviews for Ghost Story|
| Hypnosis Writer chapter 1 . 3/9
I looked over my possessions: my leather duster, my hat, my blasting rod, a few coins
You have fallen for one of the dresden files lies. Harry does not wear a hat.
| Radon088 chapter 14 . 10/19/2014
Good but can we go back to Dresden now?
| EpitomyofShyness chapter 14 . 9/15/2014
Incredible. I honestly don't know what else I can say. Seriously incredible, thank you for writing this.
| neogoki chapter 5 . 7/8/2014
oh here comes Mab, if Shep survives her then the Reapers will look a lot less intimidating
| neogoki chapter 4 . 7/8/2014
that is the way to leave a first impression, Shotgun to the face
| neogoki chapter 2 . 7/8/2014
Harry Dresden unlocked a new Achivement: "Future Estate Damage"
not even buildings build centuries after his time are safe from him
| Lazurman chapter 13 . 5/7/2014
Careful Shep, your Rico is showing.
| Lazurman chapter 10 . 5/7/2014
What happened to Shepard's A Ranked Charisma? Seems more like a brick with guns here.
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
OH DEAR. Some ROB just pulled the ol' switcheroo. Dresdenverse gets Shepard, ME-verse gets Dresden. Holy /fuck/.
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 8 . 1/15/2014
One hell of a badass boast this chapter
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 2 . 1/15/2014
This. This is. FUCKING AMAZING! Great characterization.
| FloridaMagpie chapter 14 . 10/4/2013
Really interesting idea. Hope you continue it!
| JackFrost21 chapter 14 . 9/24/2013
| Arafell chapter 14 . 8/11/2013
It's fun to watch Shephard do crazy stuff, but I can't help but think he's OOC. Then again, Mass Effect's always been heavy on character personalization, so I suppose my Shephard could act way different from yours.
Anyways, good story so far, can't wait to see Shepherds eventual interaction with the Council and Dresden's efforts against the Reapers.
| WolfsTrinity chapter 14 . 6/10/2013
I seem to have missed the part where you play merry hell with both universes. Maybe you're doing it on purpose or maybe you're just not paying a lot of attention, but Mass Effect events are happening out of order and the six month gap between Dresdenverse plots has mysteriously vanished. I Don't Actually Mind This, but I'm a bit irritated that there wasn't a warning about it. Would've saved me the trouble of trying to piece things together for several chapters. Your Shepard personality also seems a bit shaky, like you really never planned it out beforehand and had to work all of it out as you went. Bit of a downside, but nothing too major; as a reader, I'm kind of expecting blank and generic from a male Shepard. Hate his VA, which is partly why, but that's really beyond the point.
Now, I've listed the things I didn't like first, but that's not to say I hate this story or anything. It's a great story. I'm enjoying the hell out of it. The basic idea is immensely refreshing and even with the above semi-issues taken into account, you're doing an excellent job of realizing it. Put together weird, interesting idea with solid quality writing adds up to the type of story I most enjoy reading and this is no exception. Looking forward to what else you end up doing with it.