|Reviews for Ghost Story|
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 8 . 1/15
One hell of a badass boast this chapter
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 2 . 1/15
This. This is. FUCKING AMAZING! Great characterization.
| FloridaMagpie chapter 14 . 10/4/2013
Really interesting idea. Hope you continue it!
| JackFrost21 chapter 14 . 9/24/2013
| Arafell chapter 14 . 8/11/2013
It's fun to watch Shephard do crazy stuff, but I can't help but think he's OOC. Then again, Mass Effect's always been heavy on character personalization, so I suppose my Shephard could act way different from yours.
Anyways, good story so far, can't wait to see Shepherds eventual interaction with the Council and Dresden's efforts against the Reapers.
| WolfsTrinity-TSO chapter 14 . 6/10/2013
I seem to have missed the part where you play merry hell with both universes. Maybe you're doing it on purpose or maybe you're just not paying a lot of attention, but Mass Effect events are happening out of order and the six month gap between Dresdenverse plots has mysteriously vanished. I Don't Actually Mind This, but I'm a bit irritated that there wasn't a warning about it. Would've saved me the trouble of trying to piece things together for several chapters. Your Shepard personality also seems a bit shaky, like you really never planned it out beforehand and had to work all of it out as you went. Bit of a downside, but nothing too major; as a reader, I'm kind of expecting blank and generic from a male Shepard. Hate his VA, which is partly why, but that's really beyond the point.
Now, I've listed the things I didn't like first, but that's not to say I hate this story or anything. It's a great story. I'm enjoying the hell out of it. The basic idea is immensely refreshing and even with the above semi-issues taken into account, you're doing an excellent job of realizing it. Put together weird, interesting idea with solid quality writing adds up to the type of story I most enjoy reading and this is no exception. Looking forward to what else you end up doing with it.
| Ishmu the Crazy chapter 11 . 6/7/2013
I really am enjoying this. It reads just like a Dresden novel. My only problem with it is in this chapter. In the tenth book if my memory serves me correctly, I believe Dresden managed to take possession of Magog's coin and give it to the church for safe keeping. I'd say how he got it but I don't want to spoil for those who haven't read it. Anyhow that is my only real complaint so far, and I can overlook it easily enough, so keep up the good work.
| Phygmalion chapter 14 . 6/6/2013
Very, very nice! I have to say, I did NOT expect Shiro to show up and save the day. Still, it seems extremely appropriate that he would continue the work of a Knight, even in the afterlife. Like Sir Stuart said, though, ghosts are just impressions, not the actual person. Who Shiro WAS has moved on. :) Also, Mort was awesome. "Time's up", indeed.
This has been quite the interesting arc - Denarians, Faeries, Corpsetaker, Tilly, Murphy, and this unknown player. I wonder who will come next? Also, Demonreach - what are your plans for that? Canon goes as planned, and Sharkface and Maeve are going to try to blow the place to kingdom come - how's Shepard going to stop that and the Outsiders from eating reality?
So, I'm guessing that we're going to go see Dresden next? Should be cool. Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Andrew James Drake chapter 13 . 5/17/2013
The 21st century is in NO WAY prepared for a PTSD inflicted Commander Shepard... who now has the Demoman from TF2's voice in my head. Thanks alot for that, its entertaining.
| g3m1n1 chapter 13 . 5/10/2013
oh, shepard. you're adorable.
| 10000 Fists chapter 13 . 5/10/2013
Good update, and I am looking forward to the next!
| Phygmalion chapter 13 . 5/10/2013
Hooray! New chapter! When I first found your story, I had played Mass Effect, but knew nothing about the Dresden files. Between the last chapter and this one, I read all 14 books, most of the short stories, and re-read this fic. IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE NOW! I even have some theories about what is happening, and how ME and the DF are connected. Presumably, there's a connection between Outsiders and the Reapers. Quick question, though: is Demonreach going to make an appearance, and was Dresden's killer in the book responsible for this version's death?
Anyway, great job, and looking forward to the next chapter!
Also, "Yes, Rico - Kaboom." :)
| starwars05 chapter 13 . 5/10/2013
OMG lol this is great and i like the wordplay is hilarious
| DamionKenley117 chapter 12 . 2/28/2013
She cursed quietly to herself as she spotted the same creature which had attacked them at Dresden's apartment.
For a moment I thought that might have been one of the Citadel (or similarly space-faring) races, until I realized Relay Whatever is still deactivated.
Anyway, I found this story in its infancy and somehow forgot to add it to alerts and favorites.
Obviously cannot wait for more. Fascinated to see where this is going.
| DamionKenley117 chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
First, how does he know Nazara/Sovereign's name?
Second, ohgodohgodohgodohgod...and Ramirez. Wait, how does Saren know of the Councils?