Reviews for These Burdens We Must Bear
HPforever-after chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Very good
vampiremuggle chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
this is quite good. awesime story!


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Doctaj10 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
There can never be to many stories about "Lauren," it was a great ep with lots to go on. I enjoyed your take :)
miaa29 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Great job, no worries that others may also have written it to death, if its a good story that's all that matters and your story is very good and well written.
ShaNini86 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I liked this because it's simple, yet painful, and on par with the show. I think 'Lauren' inspired a lot of fanfics and plot bunnies, so no worries. I really loved the John Keats quote too. Your descriptions were vivid and helped set the melancholy mood. Nice story!:)
HPforever-after chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Very good. N poor Hotch he never really got a chance to say goodbye
Greg'sgirl5 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011