|Reviews for The Art of War|
| DGeoff chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Omg this story is so good aklsjdklajdl I hope you're still writing it! I have an OC, if you're still taking any!
Full Name: Jason Christopher Mackentire
Nickname: Mack, Ken, or Topher
Personality: easy to laugh, first to joke around, but serious when needed. It's hard to make him angry, but once he is, he explodes. Very understanding, and a really good listener. Very trusting and loyal to the right person.
Likes: riding his bike, swimming, joking around with his friends.
Dislikes: bigotry, spiders, and feeling helpless.
Hair Color and Style: red hair, buzz cut except for the very front, where it's spiked up a little.
Eye Color and Shape: big, round green eyes.
Height and Weight: 6'4", 210 lbs
Body Type: broad shoulders, thick chest, long legs
Face Shape: angular, strong jawline
Distinguishing Features: left cheek dimples when he smiles. Big snake tattoo all down his back that wraps around his neck, and his mom's name on his right bicep (She died when he was 17). Has a slight Irish accent when under extreme pressure, heard it from his parents.
Clothing (Please be very specific): green camouflage army pants (his dad's), black t-shirt, silver aviator glasses, worn black army boots, black belt with a shiny, silver belt buckle, one silver earring in his right ear.
Hometown(If not in LA): Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania.
Where do they live: small town near Lake Tahoe in Northern California. Came to visit LA for a vacation
Family: mom died when he was 17, Dad still lives in Pittsburgh, sister Aine (pronounced Awn-ye) goes to college in Washington state.
Job: teaches kids how to shoot bows and arrows
Survival Skill: (obviously) good with a bow and arrow, father taught him how to shoot any basic military gun.
How do they fit into the story of Battle LA: was on vacation when aliens attacked, hid with the Rincon family in the police station to help protect the kids.
Anything Else: hmm... Really, really flexible. Almost freakishly flexible.
| Black Aeon chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Alright...so...I know I'm pretty late & you might not even be accepting applications or oc's...but...I just thought I'd try
Full Name: Kai Namazaki
Nickname: Baby Girl
Personality: Tough; smartass; overprotective of friends and family; tomboy/one of the guys; nerd/geek
Likes: fixing cars; skateboarding; working on computers
Dislikes: overly girly things; not being able to protect the ones she love
Hair Color and Style: black; mid-back length with chin length bangs framing right side of face & left side of head shaved off
Eye Color and Shape: black, almond shaped
Height and Weight: 5'0”, 120 lbs
Body Type: toned & healthy, but still curvy
Face Shape: slightly round
Distinguishing Features: japanese full sleeve tattooed on right arm; tribal half-sleeve tattooed on left arm; 4g gauges; snake bites
Clothing (Please be very specific): black Misfits shirt with sleeves ripped off; dark washed skinny jeans; black doc martens
Hometown(If not in LA): Tokyo, Japan
Where do they live: South Central, Los Angeles
Family: father was a marine that died during the alien attacks; mother was an army doctor that died a few years ago in a hospital bombing
Job: Mechanic & Computer Tech/Hacker
Survival Skill: military family taught her how to use & utilize weapons; Computer skills; fix cars
How do they fit into the story of Battle LA: Was with her father before he got killed, and ran to find shelter, taking her father's butterfly knife and sniper rifle for protection. Goes to police station to find any help and/or survivors
Anything Else: growing up in south central, she's used to shooting and death. Spent 2 months in juvie for aggravated assault against a rich kid that tried to sexually harass her.
Sorry if too descriptive or if too...typical heroine-ish...I also like Imlay...just saying...haha
| Black Aeon chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
Hi, I just watched B:LA...and then I decided to read B: LA fanfiction. I read this one first, & I really like your story. It's really well written & I hope that you will update soon :)
| Sol3a1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
What's an OC?
| DJChef7 chapter 4 . 9/29/2012
Yaaaaaaaay the chapter is up i was hoping to hear from the story i love it and its only been a few chapters lal short chapter this time but still nicely put together :) hope to read more!
| xXxFrostBitexXx chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Haha. I call my bro benny boy all the time :)
| Samm The Writer chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Full Name: Samuel James Lucas
Personality: strong, will do anything and everything for anyone.
Likes: Hot Girls, video games, Combat.
Dislikes: Shooting another human in person.
Hair Color and Style: brown almost black hair that short with pushed back spiky bangs.
Eye Color and Shape: piercing blue eyes, round.
Height and Weight: 6'3, 175
Body Type: AB
Face Shape: Round.
Distinguishing Features: big European nose, bushy brown eye brows, heavy southern accent, built like an average military veteran.
Clothing (Please be very specific): Flight Suit with patches all over it with a few tears here and there.
Hometown(If not in LA): Columbia, SC
Where do they live: Las Vegas, Nevada.
Family: None that I want to appear.
Job: 57th Combat Wing Pilot.
Survival Skill: Can move stealthily like a ghost.
How do they fit into the story of Battle LA: Flew to LA to provide air support from Nellis Air Force Base. Got shot down. Would like your group to find him.
Anything Else: I never saw the movie and I don't plan to but I like all these OC stories.
| Kenny'sOrangeParka chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Cool chapter. :) Glad you updated.
| Anthony2190 chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Full Name: Anthony Paul Jackson
Nickname: Jack Knife
Personality: Anthony is the type who keeps to themselves he often doesn't talk not because he doesn't want to but because he often has nothing important to say. If spoken to he will speak but often only to answer whatever is asked of him don't expect much small talk from him. If anyone is hurt or injured he doesn't hesitate to help them in however way he can.
Likes: Birds,Fishing,Watching Movies
Hair Color and Style: Short Brown unruly hair
Eye Color and Shape: brown eyes almond shaped
Ethnicity: Southern American
Height and Weight: 5'11 and 167lbs
Body Type: Thin meant more for running then for strength but still has some muscle
Face Shape: concave cheeks and slightly pointed nose
Distinguishing Features: he's got a scar on his right hand on the palm from an accident while playing Knife Roulette
Clothing (Please be very specific): United States Marine Corps Light Infantry Uniform
Hometown(If not in LA): Austin, Texas
Where do they live: Los Angeles
Family:2 Brother and 1 sister in Texas along with his parents
Job: United States Marine Corp Sniper
Survival Skill: good at concealing himself and also able to figure things out pretty quickly
How do they fit into the story of Battle LA: Anthony was set in downtown Los Angeles as part of a surveillance unit meant to gather intel on the Unknown Enemy and take out key targets using airstrikes and sniper fire the plan went wrong and He quickly realized the enemy were homing in on Radio signals so he is limited to sniping any enemy that come within his line of sight
| Gearhead96 chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
Wow i really liked it alot. Even if there wasn't any action i still like ow you introduced the 't wait to see them all in action. Again thank's for including my character, and take your time with the rest of the story, i'd rather wait for a good chapter then have no wait for a crappy chapter. Keep writing and hope to read to read some more soon.
| Blue of Doom chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Nice fic you've got going on! Plenty of action, and interesting characters.
If it's okay, I've got a submission.
Full Name: Ferdinand E. Carter
Personality: Ferdinand is a quiet guy. He gets stressed easily. If you get to know him, he's actually quite friendly.
Likes: Spending time with his family, stargazing, reading.
Dislikes: Being away from people for too long, morons, fish.
Hair Color and Style: Dark and short.
Eye Color and Shape: Hazel, somewhat big eyes.
Ethnicity: African American
Height and Weight: 5'8", 160 lbs.
Body Type: Short?
Face Shape: Average.
Distinguishing Features: Right arm amputated at the elbow.
Clothing (Please be very specific): Normally wears a neutral colored t-shirt and blue jeans.
Hometown(If not in LA):
Where do they live: A bit outside of LA, but was in the city during the invasion.
Family: Samantha Carter: Wife (deceased); Abigail Carter: 3 year old daughter
Survival Skill: Can find the easiest/quickest route to a place.
How do they fit into the story of Battle LA: Civilian
Anything Else: N/A
| Patriot-112 chapter 3 . 8/28/2011
Well done! I saw my OC in there, nice job!
| purepazaak chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
Woo! That was amazing! :D Glad you put Allison in this chapter! Can't wait for an update :)
| DJChef7 chapter 3 . 8/25/2011
Love the first chapter :) nice work with the oc's and working it with the story :D
| marinebrat15 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Great fic...love all the action...please update soon! :)