Reviews for Message Delivered
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Good show! I'm very glad that Snape found Aurora in time.
jules3677 chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Fabulous! Short. Full of suspense. Snape saves the girls. Well written. Loved it.
Wilmon chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Good start to this story. I am dying to know who the death eater was. I hope you confine the story.
librarywitch chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Awesome fiction! I loved it. The suspense of who "she" was well done. Hope you are going to continue at a later date!
JWOHPfan chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Great story, just one little thing, who the hell was it?
wandamarie chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
thanks it was a good oen
DaughterOfAres chapter 1 . 5/12/2011

I love it!

I have to admit...I kinda feel bad for the Death Eater...He didn't stand a chance against an enraged SNape...I do hope it was Malfoy... :D

The wonderful domestic scene at the begining was adorable. I love how on his first day of freedom...he sits and reads a paper while eating breakfast. Wonderful and telling. Love it!

I'm curious about the incident Severus witnessed between his father and the woman he saved...sounds like an interesting story. :D (me is getting ideas...)

I was so afraid SNape wouldn't get to her in time...that would be horrible for him to lose her and the baby...(glares at Lan for scaring her)...fortunantly you were not in a 'tragic' mode when you wrote this.

Absolutely wonderful Lan! Loved it! I want more!