Reviews for Rolling Blackouts
Daggerxxx chapter 1 . 10/9/2021
Shitty story. The only thing that was interesting was the initial plot. The author should have stopped at the first chapter, lol. And then the complete crap went. Asuka invites Touji from all people, alcohol at 14, yeah yeah.
Uncle Dork chapter 7 . 8/5/2021
OH you really just did that xD
Meep chapter 7 . 12/6/2020
Hi, just wanted to leave my thoughts after reading this yesterday (you're probably not reading these anymore since the story is pretty old but what the heck). I really enjoyed where everything was going up until the last 2 chapters. I just found it lazy and unrealistic how you kinda just ended any sort of relationship between Asuka and Shinji with the four year timeskip (seeing as how much Shinji wanted to see her after the battle). It also really bothered me how Asuka's virginity was just gone after the time-skip without any real explaination nor warrancy from the plot. The way you built it up in the previous chapters is that they both really wanted to when the time was right, working it up to be something cathartic later on. To kind of reitterate what another review said, it was just kind of thrown out for the sake of it and it kinda killed the story for me. Don't get me wrong though, I think you have a real knack for writing and everything up until the final chapters was very well thought out and realistic. Keep writing!
Hoodiebud chapter 6 . 7/21/2020
PHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWW

I didn't think anyone had the guts to almost kill Asuka from out of nowhere! However, those last lines, oh God they're good. Because they've finally gotten something.

Genuine, mature hope.

And because of that, it's 100% guaranteed they both will have grandchildren next to their death bed.
Martyr Mcjones chapter 1 . 7/16/2020
Meh. Ok story
Martyr Mcjones chapter 6 . 6/6/2020
This is mega-gay lol
Martyr Mcjones chapter 7 . 6/6/2020
I don't like AsuShin, it makes me feel sick
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2020
Asuka is at fault and yet Shinji feels remorseful like why? No matter how tragic, if someone offers you a blanket, you hit them on the head and when they express disgust, stop talking to them. Wow brilliant .
doomNgloom chapter 1 . 3/21/2020
there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.

Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m.
She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room, now you can deal with it
Morat Gurgeh chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
This is very good story. Thank you for writing this. Really touched my heart
Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2019
Kinda gay imo
TotallySwagical chapter 7 . 12/1/2017
You're absolutely nuts dude. imo the best author on this site. jesus. if u ever come back to this fandom, know that there'll be at least 1 idiot waiting for your return
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
Shit this is so canon. I can totally imagine this happening
Ignis Aurum Probat chapter 7 . 7/15/2017
This was a wonderful story. So well written and angsty but with a hopeful ending. Love truly is everything and I'm glad that despite everything they still got together
Hairy Putin chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
The ending kind of made me sad.
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