"You know what's funny?" She said. "Last time we shared a bed, I almost got cut in half by the world's biggest box knife."

Shitgy grinned. His hand reached over to the coffee table, and procured an item. Holding his thumb on the side, he moved the slider up and down, rapidly. *Rckrckrckrk*

A horrible grin stretched itself across Shitgy's face.

The mood was thoroughly ruined.

They still fucked though, I mean what did you expect? It's still shitty smut fanfiction.

Bruh, Asuka of all people invites Toji out on a date? I'm not even gonna bother reading after this point, disappointing fic.

Really wonderful. That ending was incredible. Thanks for making this!

Shitty story. The only thing that was interesting was the initial plot. The author should have stopped at the first chapter, lol. And then the complete crap went. Asuka invites Touji from all people, alcohol at 14, yeah yeah.

OH you really just did that xD

Hi, just wanted to leave my thoughts after reading this yesterday (you're probably not reading these anymore since the story is pretty old but what the heck). I really enjoyed where everything was going up until the last 2 chapters. I just found it lazy and unrealistic how you kinda just ended any sort of relationship between Asuka and Shinji with the four year timeskip (seeing as how much Shinji wanted to see her after the battle). It also really bothered me how Asuka's virginity was just gone after the time-skip without any real explaination nor warrancy from the plot. The way you built it up in the previous chapters is that they both really wanted to when the time was right, working it up to be something cathartic later on. To kind of reitterate what another review said, it was just kind of thrown out for the sake of it and it kinda killed the story for me. Don't get me wrong though, I think you have a real knack for writing and everything up until the final chapters was very well thought out and realistic. Keep writing!

PHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWW

I didn't think anyone had the guts to almost kill Asuka from out of nowhere! However, those last lines, oh God they're good. Because they've finally gotten something.

Genuine, mature hope.

And because of that, it's 100% guaranteed they both will have grandchildren next to their death bed.

Meh. Ok story

This is mega-gay lol

I don't like AsuShin, it makes me feel sick

Asuka is at fault and yet Shinji feels remorseful like why? No matter how tragic, if someone offers you a blanket, you hit them on the head and when they express disgust, stop talking to them. Wow brilliant .

there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.

Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m.
She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room, now you can deal with it

This is very good story. Thank you for writing this. Really touched my heart

Kinda gay imo

You're absolutely nuts dude. imo the best author on this site. jesus. if u ever come back to this fandom, know that there'll be at least 1 idiot waiting for your return