I'm leaving this here, because I don't know what else to do. I've been getting a 503 error message every time I try to go to chapter 3, just thought you'd want to know that...

Touhou bullet hell game reference
Talia cameo
Birth of the Demon Lord of Avalon

That time Heero got Laid by a MILF

He may be your biological father, Cagalli. But he ain't your daddy.
-A Guardians of the Galaxy 2 reference.

Well, atleast Lacus and Cagalli get to bofe by grieving their dead dads

"Zero Override Command: Operation Meteor!"

So that's how the Zero System would affect the Pilot resolve and as if the system itself makes any Mobile Suit: Gundam, sentient and alive. Or at least a will.

Excellent start!

Always wanted to read a story centered around Heero with this level of quality!

The Power of Twin Buster Rifle at 100% is no joke.
Its capacity of Destruction is great.

Endless Waltz

If only the other Gundam Pilots could see what Heero's doing.
They would have tried to be Wingman's for him. Especially Duo

"History is much like an endless waltz in three/four time. The three beats of war, peace, and revolution seem to continue on for eternity."

Ay, Heero finally said it

Wing Zero is "the most powerful mobile suit in the Earth Sphere. "
For now atleast

5 Fifteen year old boys against the world.
Sums up Gundam Wing

If the Gundam Sandrock were here, it would have been a difference in the fight

So something funny I noticed on my reread through of this Awesome fic and series is that you made a minor mistake Meteor. Said mistake is during the escape after Heero frees Shemei's parents. You have Heero state that he can't go all out as the Acceleration and G-forces could kill them. But if there in space that means there's no gravity available to exert said forces on them thus Heero could go all out. Unless of course you say that the PLANTS have there own gravitational force and that pulling off those maneuvers while still inside their orbit would be what kills them.

Bookmark number one

Well this chapter was a lot shorter than I actually expected. So we've skipped two years forwards, the designs from the AC timeline have been put to use like the shuttle the Waltfelds and Murrue and Heero are on.

Nice to see Heero train Murrue in hand to hand combat. I wonder how well trained she is? Maybe we'll find out when we see her fight a hostile in the future.

And my favourite part about this Chapter, is the debut of what I strongly believe is Wing Zero Custom, though I like the term Albion.

But is there any meaning behind that name besides it being referred to as "white land" or something? Just curious.

As predicted, ZAFT and the EA are walking that same path down to war again. Our boy called it.

This story has been such a phenomenal and incredible ride and a brilliant journey into Heero's life in the CE, his romance with Murrue, him establishing camaraderie and friendships with Kiran, Lacus, Cagalli, ATHRUN, Erica, Shemei, Eric, Waltfeld etc. His battles with ZAFT and EA and the reputation he's forged such as being referred to as the "Demon Lord of Avalon".

Heero has certainly been on a rollercoaster ride that is his journey to this new battlefield.

Now I hope to see the AC pilots arrive. LOGOS and ZAFT ain't ready for them.

OM, you are by far one of the best and the most talented writers on this site. Your writing is absolutely exceptional and no different to a a seasoned author. Your knowledge and passion for military history, politics and armed conflicts shines so brightly in your chapters and are a glowing testament to your intelligence.

I've always wanted to read a Gundam Wing novel like this and it took a fellow fan like you to fulfill that desire.

So thank you so much for writing this! I genuinely mean that. I know your chapters are long but it's packed with a lot of content that's definitely worth reading.

So VERY well done on this!

Can't believe I've finished this. Oh well, onto Destiny's Call very soon now!