Reviews for The Woes of Yagami Hayate
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
ays102 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Continue please!
bobbo chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
this was kinda funny. i can't say i support the ship though.
Ryuuohjin chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Really like this one
Sniperk chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Hilarious. And worst of it all. I too can see it happening. _
manekinekotan chapter 1 . 6/18/2011

Fate teasing Hayate! Warning/teasing her about her daughter's crush on the general who is one of the closest friends of both her mothers! And the comment about the determination of a Takamachi wanting something! And the headdesking! (I wonder if Shamal is going to ask about that big bruise on Hayate's head!)

Thanks for the hilarious story!
ColinatorGX chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Oh my.

"BEFRIENDED" taken to its dreadful next phase. XD
deathcurse chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
*Trying to stop laughing to review properly*

Hilarious! I was never a particular fan of Vivio/Hayate, but this could easily sway me into that camp! _-

The first bit easily had me laughing already, with the very official report that stated Nanoha did everything by the book...but her trigger-happy-beamspam tendencies still caused quite a lot of property damage that now Hayate has to fix XD.

*Happy sigh, picturing Fate in the Admiral uniform...* P

Hayate reaction when Fate asked if Vivio had already approached her made me think that Hayate was having a Fridge realization that some previous innocent memory of hers about Vivio suddenly has a new light, LOL.

Nice to see Nanoha not being the super-over-protective mother for once, and instead be entirely amused by the whole situation .

""Fate-chan! I babysat Vivio! Since she was six! I carried her on my back before! I processed her school entry documentations! And I went to her Parents Visitation day when both of you had missions! And I was there when she got grounded for the first time! I'm practically her third mother! " - This outburst from Hayate had me laughing! I love how specific Hayate is in bringing up all these instances, especially the Parent Visitation day example XD.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this P, thanks for the awesome fic!
Seorang chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
it was ok, its fun reading others teasing Hayate for once
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Well, well, soldier...




O_o What is this I don't even...?




Oh my. Oh MY!



Holy CRAP! This was...X_x This is FUBAR on SO many levels, yet...I digg it! O Now, I'm gonna need to read more fics like this! A

Maeby you could write a sequel or somethin' like that? :D

N-I-CE work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
JBebe chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Totally loved it! Poor Hayate...or maybe not. And go Fate for teasing her about it. Vivio and Hayate-what a hilarious and fun pairing!
Kode Dekka chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I wonderfully amusing tale. Ah I can rest easy now knowing that the future of this series in the hands of writers like you.
Lupo Azzuro chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Scarring? Bah, I thought this was hilarious. I can actually see something like this happening, which makes in even more hilarious. Good work.
XxLiLAzNxX chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Lol man that was hilarious. I'm for Vivio and Einhart but this pairing is pretty amusing too. XP

Great story
Master Kosa chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Thank you. This is probably the first time I've read Vivio x Hayate fic, even though the first wasn't directly present. And it was amusing as hell. Poor Hayate. First I expected her being scared of Nanoha going ballistic for corrupting her daughter but the outcome was even better.
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