Reviews for The Beginnings
5 years of fun chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
If you're reading Icha2 Paradise, you will never be the same。
xKireyy chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I like it (:
Killer of thy Cookies chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Pervertic Kakashi.

~Killer of thy Cookies, Kook
Fan KakaRin chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
no se escribir en ingles pero espero k me entiendas.

tu historia me encanto, la leia una y otra vez, entiendo k derrepente se nos van las ideas pero espero k algun dia continues la version con capitulos.

escribes muy bien
CarefreeSummer chapter 1 . 5/22/2011

Kakashi's got it bad NOW, doesn't he?


And I love it.
ajd09 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
My initial reaction was 'noooo, there needs to be more!' As I think about it, we actually know how it ends in canon. Also, the character development was very good. What was better was how he didn't act on his impulses. I really enjoyed this one-shot.
phantom130 5 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Yay awesome story XD