Reviews for The tale of Panchan
Nukem999 chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
This was a pretty cute storyy. I always loved Pan/Trunks and the whole school assignment was a nice way to bring them together. The story at the end was a very clever touch, very nice. Couple constructive critcisms though: 1. Why are they talking in japanese? I don't see the need to call them chan and that, 2. Increase the romance, this kind of felt like a crush then an actual pairing, 3. The whole bully fight thing at the end was a bit cliche, you could have developed it more with better dialogue, I just think it needs a bit more "Meat" to its bones. Other then that, pretty good job.
Moon'sHope chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
aw! It is so cute!
PanBraSaiyin chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
AW this is waysweet
ladybugg chapter 1 . 12/22/2003
Sweet fic. Are you gonna write a sequel to this? It has so much potential for so much more.
PanBraSaiyin chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
aw I like your story, I hope you write more like this, because I like fantasy.

Please read minecontinue soon!
Akane82 chapter 1 . 2/1/2002
This story was good I especially liked the begining.
Panny-Plan chapter 1 . 12/29/2001
That's so sweet... I wonder if she ever really does read her story to Trunks? Well, I guess all we can do is guess.
Rose Kitty chapter 1 . 11/22/2001
Awww..that was cute! PAN AND TRUNKS 4 EVA!
snuffles chapter 1 . 10/8/2001
please write more!
Celeb Ryu chapter 1 . 9/24/2001
AWWW KAWWAI AGAIN! great now i'm makin u a fav author see what u made me do
AliiChan chapter 1 . 7/25/2001
that was good...good grammar you should write a sequel
Kitanna chapter 1 . 7/11/2001
umm ya up to the part were those guys were trying to play with pan it was okay
Pan-chan chapter 1 . 6/29/2001
That's so sweet. Hehehe. Write more _~
The Shadow2 chapter 1 . 6/5/2001
that was cute
Ascaisil chapter 1 . 4/30/2001
that is soooo cute! trunks and pan belong to each other, and if anyone forgets that, ::vegeta like smirk:: trunks is there to remind 'em. hehehe. great story! keep writing about these two!
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