|Reviews for Friday 13th|
| Happy1K1nob1 chapter 31 . 1/5
This was rather amazing of a story, and I really truly enjoyed it. I hope that your other stories are just as good, because I'm just about to find out! :)
| gregory chapter 3 . 1/19/2014
raven i like you what is you phone number
| TOkun92 chapter 23 . 5/31/2013
Another great chapter. I only found this tonight, and I'm almost already finished.
| TOkun92 chapter 21 . 5/31/2013
Another great chapter. However, I will point out one flaw; when you end a dialogue sentence, it ends like this,
"I don't know," he said. 'He' is lowercased, and the sentence ends with a comma.
"I don't know." He said.
An easy way of correcting this is by looking at the next sentence. For example,
"I don't know." He pinched the bridge of his nose.
The sentence ends at 'know', and begins again at 'He'.
I made the same mistake for several months, until it was pointed out by another author.
| TOkun92 chapter 20 . 5/31/2013
I never read fanfics that have a homosexual pairing, fearing it would be pure smut. I have myself written a fanfic where the two main characters are homosexual women, but that wasn't for smut. It was for art. You are a great writer, and you pace everything greatly. You should be very proud. The way you write the characters makes it easier to read; it is realistic, rather than two girls all of a sudden becoming sexual partners for no apparent reason than just 'because'.
I'm not saying those who write fanfics with sexual overtones are bad; I just don't like it when it's pure smut, with nothing but graphically described sex scenes. Doesn't fit the character. But the way you write them does make it fit.
Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your stories. I apologize for the late review; I wanted to make sure it wasn't more goddamn pornography.
| Yuri-ish chapter 31 . 2/4/2013
Thought the story was great, although I do feel like it suffered from an identity crisis with the romance and mystery. This identity crisis, however, did not detract from the overall quality, but, rather, split it among the two parts. I feel like you could have written a better romance or a better mystery, but instead you chose a rather good mix. I thought the ending was well handled, although not quite my taste. Your grammer throughout was generally spot on and the characters were very likable and in character when possible. Overall I rather enjoyed the story, and hope to see and read more from you.
| this SHIP of FOOLS chapter 31 . 10/21/2012
OMG I LOVE YOU WILL YOU MARRY ME.
But seriously. So favoriting this. It was wonderfully epically awesome and I completely ship them like nobody's business now! Holy shit! BEST THING EVER.
This is the first fanfic I've read in this ship (I've read some robstar ones, but mostly I'm a potterhead) and I'm also quite the cannon nazi. But my friend said to me the other day, "what is raven was a lesbian?" And then BAM this came along and now: FAVORITE SHIP.
| Zaan299 chapter 31 . 9/12/2012
Ha ha ha ha ha! That was a great ending I love the line "Why the hell would I want your fork?" Rob is just asking for trouble a little later. Again, this was a great read and even though I've read it before it's still hasn't lost the luster from the first read. This was either well thought out or your a genius! Either way, this probably puts you up a FF famous or something...
I'm looking forward to rereading all your other works to see if they still have the same spark as this story! Here's hoping it never ends!
| Zaan299 chapter 26 . 9/11/2012
Um... That was an interesting development. It's nice to see Rae breaking down some barriers and going for something she wants... OBVIOUSLY she partially wanted to be in that situation or she would have said something. It's nice to know hormonal induced teens can forget about near death experiences by... being intimate with one another.
I just hope everything works out for the two. It seems likely that if Starfire did find out who Rae was seeing that she would be the most supportive. Followed by Cy... maybe. I just hope for the best.
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/11/2012
Legen- wait for it... dary! Nice way to set the mood. There's nothing to get a couple hotter than almost dying... we'll that's probably only the case with hormonal induced teens at least. I also like it that Robin has let up a bit on Raven and the team by giving them a day off; I guess Dick isn't a total ass after all. This story is REALLY AWESOME so far... I'm not sure I'll be able to pause and comment till I finish... but I will try.
| Zaan299 chapter 25 . 9/11/2012
Nice... Loving the developing relationship between the two. And the serious moments with the Shadow Man are interesting as well... I'm glad you're making up the serious moments with more Jinx and Rae fluff. They needed some love and well... Rae needs to be more trusting. Jinx is telling the truth and Raven should sense that with her empathic abilities.
| Zaan299 chapter 18 . 9/11/2012
Nice! Probably one of the best ways I've seen Raven experience terror. Hoepfully she can find some solace in the embrace of Jinx
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/10/2012
Ha ha ha ha... Ah, if only the creators of the show would have been a bit more... revealing about Ravens love life (which was nonexistant), but that's why we have this site! and you SepticMind! Bravo! Great story so far. I've forgotten most of it from my first read and it's almost like opening up a new read!
I love this story and will hope tho consume many more chapters of this before moving on to the rest of your works!
| Zaan299 chapter 12 . 9/10/2012
Wow. I'm guessing Raven is sickened by this because she's part human as well as demon... I've already read this story, but it's been a while and I've forgotten how... descriptive the kills were... now if you'll excuse me, i need to puke my guts out before moving on... Alright I'm better! Usually I can hold up in that kind of thing, but..
| Zaan299 chapter 7 . 9/10/2012
Nice! This obviously won't go according to plan... All faked romances must leave something slightly attatched and I'm betting Jinx isn't just doing this to get Raven on her side. No... I'm pretty sure, if it were up to her, she would have the empath all to herself. Meanwhile Jinx is leaving Raven confused and frustrated by this new feeling in her. She didn't know Jinx swung that way and now she's questioning if she herself swings that way... let's see where her emoticlones lead her to...